Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: begin with a clear topic sentence, give one specific reason with an example, and avoid repetition (e.g., "the book that I've read" and "journals that I'm reading"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I often read non-fiction books and academic journals because they help me learn new facts and improve my thinking. As a result, I can apply what I learn to my studies and work.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct preference, then give a concise reason and one specific example. Avoid vague phrases and ensure grammatical accuracy (e.g., "a lot more easier" should be "much easier").

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen when the book is not available in print because it's much more convenient. For instance, I often download articles on my tablet so I can read them on the go.

Sugerencia: Organize into a clear contrast: one sentence for when you read carefully and one for when you do not. Use precise language and correct prepositions ("pay attention to the details"). Provide a short example of each situation.

Ejemplo: I read very carefully when I follow instructions, for example, assembling furniture, because I need to pay attention to the details. In contrast, I skim through novels or news articles when I just want light entertainment.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then explain with one specific example for each method. Improve grammar ("I'm just going to scan", "I'm reading"). Avoid repeating "depends" without clarification.

Ejemplo: I use both methods: I scan when I need a quick overview, for example checking news headlines, and I read in detail when the text is important, such as instruction manuals, because accuracy matters.

× Yes, I like reading because whenever I'm reading, I'm likely to gain knowledge about the book that I've read or journals that I'm reading.

✓ Yes, I like reading because whenever I read, I am likely to gain knowledge from the book I read or the journals I am reading.

The original mixes present simple and present continuous inconsistently ('I'm reading' then 'I've read'); use consistent tense for habitual actions: present simple 'I read' and present continuous 'I am reading' for ongoing actions. Also change 'about the book that I've read' to 'from the book I read' for clearer collocation and remove unnecessary relative pronoun 'that'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and present continuous for actions happening now, and prefer 'gain knowledge from' rather than 'about' in this context.

× It depends on the availability of the book or a journal that I want to read, because nowadays reading on screen is a lot more easier and accessible for us to read something that we might have an interest in.

✓ It depends on the availability of the book or journal I want to read, because nowadays reading on a screen is much easier and more accessible for us when we want to read something we are interested in.

Errors: unnecessary article before 'journal' and incorrect article use 'on a screen' (idiomatically 'on a screen' or 'on screens'); 'a lot more easier' is ungrammatical (double comparative) so use 'much easier' and 'more accessible'; 'might have an interest in' is wordy—use 'we are interested in'. Suggestions: remove redundant articles, avoid double comparatives, and simplify 'might have an interest in' to 'are interested in'.

× I do read carefully whenever I'm reading some instructions or directions because I need to pay attention on the details or the pointers or markings on the directions and I'm not being careful whenever I'm just reading this.

✓ I read carefully whenever I am reading instructions or directions because I need to pay attention to the details, pointers, or markings on them, and I am not careful when I am just reading for pleasure.

Problems: 'pay attention on' should be 'pay attention to'; 'the details or the pointers or markings on the directions' is repetitive—use 'details, pointers, or markings on them'; 'I'm not being careful whenever I'm just reading this' awkward and tense-mismatched—use 'I am not careful when I am just reading for pleasure'. Suggestions: use correct preposition 'to', simplify repetition, and use clearer phrasing for the contrasting idea.

× It depends. If the article needs some scanning then I'm just going to scanning and if the article that I'm reading is about instructions then I do a very detailed reading because I don't want to fail.

✓ It depends. If the article needs scanning, then I will just scan it, and if the article I am reading is instructions, then I read it very carefully because I don't want to make a mistake.

Errors: 'going to scanning' incorrectly combines 'going to' with a gerund; use 'will scan' or 'scan'; 'needs some scanning' can be 'needs scanning'; 'do a very detailed reading' is awkward—use 'read it very carefully'; 'don't want to fail' is vague in reading context—use 'don't want to make a mistake'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms after 'going to' and prefer simpler verb phrases like 'scan' and 'read carefully'.