Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "feel" not "feels"), and limit to 2–3 brief supporting details (why you enjoy it and when). Use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading. It’s my favorite hobby because it helps me relax and stay calm throughout the day. I usually read before bed or during quiet afternoons, which helps me unwind.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer direct and correct small grammar issues. Use a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid repeating words like "paper" and "screen" unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because my eyes tire quickly when I read on a screen. For example, printed books are easier on my eyes and I can read longer without strain.

Sugerencia: Structure the response with a clear contrast and correct grammar. State when you read carefully, give a specific reason or example, then explain when you read less carefully. Avoid unclear phrases like "get madder" and ensure verbs and nouns agree (e.g., "books are" not "books is").

Ejemplo: I read carefully when the subject is important to me, for example self-development or study material, because I want to remember and apply the ideas. By contrast, I skim light novels or comics for enjoyment and don’t focus on every detail.

Sugerencia: Clarify terms and give a balanced opinion. Begin with a direct preference statement, define "scanning" briefly, and explain why you prefer detailed reading with a specific benefit. Avoid informal filler words like "so like" and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the content and remember important points. Scanning, which is quickly looking for key information, can be useful for finding facts, but when I study or learn something new I read in detail to grasp the whole idea.

× I'm so obsessed with reading and this is my favorite hobby because it helps me feels more calm and comfortable for all day.

✓ I'm so obsessed with reading; this is my favorite hobby because it helps me feel calmer and more comfortable all day.

Error: 'helps me feels' mixes singular verb with base form; after 'helps me' use base verb 'feel' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 Subject-verb agreement and 6 Present tense). Also 'more calm and comfortable for all day' is awkward: use comparative 'calmer' and place 'all day' at the end. Suggestion: use 'helps me feel calmer and more comfortable all day.' (IDs: 27, 6)

× I prefer reading on a paper because my eyes get tired very quickly and I feel more comfortable to read it on paper than on the screen.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because my eyes get tired very quickly and I feel more comfortable reading on paper than on a screen.

Errors: 'on a paper' and 'on the screen' misuse articles; 'paper' as a material needs no article ('on paper'), and compare 'on a screen' not 'the screen' when generic. Also 'I feel more comfortable to read it on paper' should use gerund 'reading' and omit redundant 'it'. Suggestion: 'I prefer reading on paper... comfortable reading on paper than on a screen.' (IDs: 22, 12, 8)

× I read more carefully when the books is so like about the self development and the book is so needed to me.

✓ I read more carefully when the book is about self-development and when the book is important to me.

Errors: 'the books is' has plural noun with singular verb — subject-verb agreement error; use singular 'book is' (ID 27). 'so like about' is informal and incorrect — remove 'so like' and use 'about'; 'self development' should be hyphenated or 'self-development'; 'the book is so needed to me' is unidiomatic — use 'important to me.' Suggestion: simplify to 'when the book is about self-development and when it is important to me.' (IDs: 27, 13, 22)

× And when the book is funny I don't get madder. Get mad matter about reading carefully.

✓ And when the book is funny, I don't get upset and I don't bother to read it carefully.

Errors: 'I don't get madder' compares degrees without context and is unnatural here; use 'I don't get upset.' 'Get mad matter about reading carefully' is ungrammatical (sentence structure error). The intended meaning is likely 'I don't care about reading carefully' or 'I don't bother to read it carefully.' Suggestion: 'I don't get upset and I don't bother to read it carefully.' (IDs: 26, 13)

× I don't understand the scanning reading because it's so like awful for yourself and it didn't give you anything.

✓ I don't understand scanning because it's unpleasant and it doesn't give you much information.

Errors: 'the scanning reading' is wrong noun phrase — use 'scanning' or 'scanning reading' is redundant (ID 8). 'it's so like awful for yourself' contains filler 'so like' and incorrect pronoun 'yourself'; use 'it's unpleasant' or 'it's not useful' (ID 12, 13). 'it didn't give you anything' mixes past tense 'didn't' with present general statement — use present 'doesn't give you much information' (ID 5 vs 6). Suggestion: 'I don't understand scanning because it's unpleasant and it doesn't give you much information.' (IDs: 8, 12, 6)

× But I prefer to detail detailed reading because it's so it gives you more information and you read and understand all the information in the book.

✓ But I prefer detailed reading because it gives you more information and helps you read and understand everything in the book.

Errors: 'prefer to detail detailed reading' is redundant and ungrammatical — use 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer to read in detail' (sentence structure ID 26 and verb form ID 8). 'it's so it gives' is redundant; remove filler and use 'it gives.' 'you read and understand all the information' is awkward; use 'helps you read and understand everything' or 'all the information.' Suggestion: 'I prefer detailed reading because it gives you more information and helps you read and understand everything in the book.' (IDs: 26, 8)