Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be natural and concise: remove irrelevant comments (e.g. “I am a beautiful person”), use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Focus on tense and article usage (e.g. “two or three pages a day”, “it relaxes my mind”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read two or three pages a day because it relaxes my mind and gives me energy. For example, I like short stories and self‑help books that I can finish quickly, which helps me unwind before bed.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer, then explain with linking words. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, articles) and use concise phrasing. Organize into 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of a situation.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. At home I prefer paper books because I like the feel of pages, but when I travel by bus I read on my phone because it is more convenient. For instance, I read news apps during my commute.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use correct grammar and clearer distinctions. Use linking words (because, but) and give a specific example of content that requires careful reading. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid hesitations.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the information is important or detailed, for example instructions, news about my work, or an academic article. But I skim or skip texts that are irrelevant or just gossip because they don't require deep understanding.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference if possible and justify it with reasons and a concise example. Fix grammar and avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words (however, when) and finish the second sentence fully with a complete idea.

Ejemplo: I usually scan when I am short on time or checking routine information, such as headlines or emails. However, if an article or story seems interesting or important, I read it in detail to understand the ideas and examples fully.

× As I am a beautiful person and I definitely read two or three page of book every day because it relaxed my mind and also I feel just it's boost my energy so that is why I love to read the books.

✓ I am a happy person and I definitely read two or three pages of a book every day because it relaxes my mind and boosts my energy, so that is why I love to read books.

Pronoun and word choice: 'As I am a beautiful person' is unnatural for this context; 'beautiful' refers to appearance, so use 'happy' or 'calm'. Singular/plural and articles: 'page' should be plural 'pages'; 'of book' needs the article 'a' before 'book'; 'the books' is unnecessary—use 'books'. Verb tenses/subject-verb agreement: 'relaxed' should be present 'relaxes' to match habitual action; 'it's boost' is incorrect—use 'boosts' to agree with singular subject 'it' or rephrase to 'boosts my energy'. Suggestions: choose appropriate adjectives for meaning, ensure plural for count nouns, include articles before singular count nouns, and match verb forms to present habitual context.

× Well it's depend upon the time.

✓ Well, it depends on the time.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires the third person singular verb form 'depends', not 'depend'. Preposition: 'depend upon' is acceptable but 'depend on' is more common. Suggestion: use 'it depends on' for natural phrasing.

× Whenever I had a book so I read on a paper I read by the paper book and whenever I just travel by bus or travel to any place then as you prefer to read by mobile phones.

✓ Whenever I have a book I read it in paper form, and when I travel by bus or go somewhere I prefer to read on my phone.

Tense and pronoun: 'had' should be present 'have' to match habitual action. Pronouns and phrasing: 'read on a paper' is awkward—use 'read it in paper form' or 'read a paper book'. 'As you prefer' is incorrect pronoun use and unclear; change to 'I prefer'. 'Read by mobile phones' should be 'read on my phone' (preposition change and possessive). Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits, correct pronouns, and natural prepositions.

× So according to situation I just manage.

✓ So I just manage according to the situation.

Word order: 'according to situation' needs the article 'the' and natural word order is 'manage according to the situation' or 'I manage depending on the situation'. Suggestion: include articles and arrange words for natural English.

× Well, then there was interesting news or interesting story was there? Then it is quite necessary to read it carefully.

✓ Well, if there is interesting news or a good story, it is necessary to read it carefully.

Tense and structure: The original mixes past and existential forms awkwardly ('there was...was there?'). Use a conditional or present simple for general habit: 'if there is'. Article use: 'interesting story' needs an article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'if there is' for habitual conditions and include articles.

× When there is just, uh, unnecessary information are given, then I just skip that and I didn't read it carefully.

✓ When unnecessary information is given, I skip it and I don't read it carefully.

Subject-verb agreement: 'information' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is', not 'are'. Tense consistency: change 'I didn't read it carefully' (past) to present 'I don't read it carefully' to match habitual action. Wordiness: remove filler 'just, uh'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habits and match verb number to 'information'.

× Well, it's dependable on the time and depend on the news or, uh, what type of thing I just read.

✓ Well, it depends on the time, the news, or the type of thing I am reading.

Verb form and agreement: 'it's dependable' is incorrect; use 'it depends'. 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with 'it'. Phrase 'what type of thing I just read' mixes tense—use 'I am reading' or 'I read' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'it depends on' and keep tense consistent.

× So sometime I just, uh, go through the things and just scan about that.

✓ So sometimes I just go through the material and quickly scan it.

Plural and adverb: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Go through the things' is vague—use 'go through the material'. 'Scan about that' is incorrect preposition use—use 'scan it' or 'scan the material quickly'. Suggestion: use proper adverbs and clearer nouns, and correct prepositions.

× But when there is a quite interesting thing, then I just really, really.

✓ But when something is quite interesting, I read it in detail.

Incomplete sentence: 'I just really, really' is unfinished and unclear. Replace with a complete clause that matches the question about detailed reading: 'I read it in detail'. Article use: 'a quite interesting thing' should be 'something is quite interesting' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid trailing fragments and complete the thought.