Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail (max 3–4 short sentences). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Add a brief reason or example to support your opinion and use linking words for flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I usually read every day because it helps me develop critical thinking and relax after work. For example, I often read short novels or essays that challenge my ideas, which encourages me to reflect more deeply.

Sugerencia: Clarify sentence structure and word choice: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two contrasting, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" and "however"). Fix collocations (e.g., 'academic materials' not 'serial information').

Ejemplo: It depends on the material. I prefer paper for academic texts because it gives tactile feedback and helps me concentrate and take notes. However, for quick news or reports, I find screens more convenient because I can access information instantly.

Sugerencia: Make a clear contrast with specific examples and correct grammar: use a topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give specific situations for careful reading and casual reading, linked with words like 'for example' and 'on the other hand.'

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material has long-term value, such as research papers or contracts, because mistakes can be costly. For example, when reading a study I take time to check methods and results. On the other hand, I read casually for everyday messages or short updates that don't require deep understanding.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear definitions and examples: state your preference depends on purpose, then explain when you choose detailed reading vs scanning with concrete examples. Use linking phrases and correct collocations (e.g., 'detailed reading' and 'scan for key points').

Ejemplo: It depends on my goal. For serious academic materials or complex topics I use detailed reading to fully understand the arguments and take notes. In contrast, I scan news feeds or emails to find key points quickly, and only read in detail what is relevant.

× I'm extremely enjoy reading so I can read a book every day by pro a question above from Mary.

✓ I extremely enjoy reading, so I try to read a book every day.

The original sentence uses 'I'm extremely enjoy' which mixes present continuous 'I'm' with the stative verb 'enjoy'. Use simple present 'I enjoy' or 'I extremely enjoy' (more natural: 'I really enjoy'). 'By pro a question above from Mary' is unclear and ungrammatical; I replaced it with 'I try to read a book every day' to match the intended meaning. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual likes and avoid mixing auxiliary 'be' with main verbs unless forming continuous tense.

× I can't read it every day day by day so reading can provide me with a critical thinking and I really love it.

✓ I cannot read every book every day, but reading helps me develop critical thinking, and I really love it.

Original has repetition 'every day day by day', incorrect article 'a critical thinking' and awkward connectors. I corrected the structure to contrast inability and the benefit of reading. Use 'develop critical thinking' without an indefinite article. Suggestion: avoid redundant phrases and use correct article usage with abstract nouns.

× For serial information that academic materials and refer paper based document because it provide me with sensory feedback so I can take more concentration on absorbing knowledge.

✓ For detailed academic materials and paper-based documents, I prefer paper because they provide sensory feedback, which helps me concentrate better on absorbing knowledge.

Original has fragments and unclear phrases ('serial information that academic materials and refer'). I clarified to 'detailed academic materials and paper-based documents' and fixed verb agreement 'provide' to match plural subject. Also improved clause linking and adverb placement. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and use clear noun phrases.

× However for quick information like news articles report, I think it's much more convenient to read on screen.

✓ However, for quick information like news articles or reports, I think it is much more convenient to read on a screen.

Added commas, corrected 'news articles report' to 'news articles or reports', and used the article 'on a screen'. Also 'it's' expanded to 'it is' optional. Suggestion: separate items in a list with correct conjunctions and include articles where needed.

× Well, I think it's important to read carefully on the content with provide long term values are required.

✓ Well, I think it's important to read carefully when the content provides long-term value or when accuracy is required.

Original mixes clauses and uses incorrect 'on the content with provide long term values are required'. I rephrased to a conditional clause 'when the content provides long-term value' and clarified 'or when accuracy is required'. Suggestion: express conditions clearly with 'when' or 'if' and hyphenate 'long-term' as a compound adjective.

× Critical thinking.

✓ Critical thinking is necessary in those cases.

Standalone fragment 'Critical thinking.' is incomplete. I turned it into a full sentence explaining its role. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; connect nouns to verbs to make complete sentences.

× For example, if you don't need to read too quickly, research study and you can take time to understand which detail it could.

✓ For example, when reading research, you do not need to read quickly; you can take time to understand the details.

Original mixes 'research study' awkwardly and uses 'which detail it could'. I simplified to 'when reading research' and fixed word order and verb usage. Suggestion: use clear subjects and objects and correct word order for relative information.

× I think it's also depends on what I'm reading.

✓ I think it also depends on what I am reading.

Remove the contraction mismatch: 'it depends' not 'it's depends'. 'It's' (it is) should not be followed by another verb in base form. Correct form: 'it depends'. Suggestion: use 'it depends' for this expression.

× For serious information, academic materials, anything.

✓ For serious information, such as academic materials or similar texts, detailed reading is better.

Original is a fragment listing examples without completing the sentence. I completed it by stating the preference. Suggestion: avoid dangling lists; attach them to a main clause.

× Detail reading can provide a sense of understanding given knowledge.

✓ Detailed reading can provide a deeper understanding of the material.

'Detail reading' is incorrect; use 'detailed reading'. 'A sense of understanding given knowledge' is awkward; replace with 'a deeper understanding of the material'. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective form and natural collocations ('understanding of the material').

× In contrast, scanning can help you learn information at merge social.

✓ In contrast, scanning can help you pick up information quickly for general purposes.

'At merge social' is meaningless. I interpreted the intended meaning as 'for general purposes' or 'in social situations' and provided a natural phrase 'pick up information quickly for general purposes'. Suggestion: use clear idiomatic expressions like 'pick up information quickly' and avoid literal translations.