Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'resonate my energy' → 'revitalizes me'). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I have two main hobbies. I enjoy cooking because it relaxes me and revitalizes my energy, and I often try new recipes on weekends. I also like sketching—I usually draw clouds and simple landscapes, which helps me unwind and boost my creativity.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific details; fix grammar and awkward phrases. Use linking words such as 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas, and give one example of what you painted to be more specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. As a child I loved painting with bright colors, and I often painted animals and flowers. I enjoyed mixing colors and experimenting with different brushes, which made art very fun for me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and improve grammar and cohesion. Use a topic sentence, then give a specific example and a linking phrase (e.g., 'for example' or 'nowadays'). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have—sketching has been my hobby since childhood. Nowadays, I still sketch when I have free time; for example, I often draw landscapes and flowers because drawing helps me relax and clear my mind.

Sugerencia: Start with a concise topic sentence and correct pronouns and verb forms ('my mother and I share a hobby'). Use linking words and give specific examples of what you do together. Avoid filler sounds like 'uh.'

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I share a hobby: gardening. For example, she taught me how to sow seeds, care for plants to keep them healthy, and when to pick flowers once they are fully grown.

× Yes, in my spare time I love to cook because resonate my energy and also I enjoy sketching usually sketch of a cloud and I love to do that activity. It's help me to relax and creative personality development.

✓ Yes, in my spare time I love to cook because it replenishes my energy. I also enjoy sketching, usually sketches of clouds, and I love doing that activity. It helps me to relax and develops my creativity.

Multiple errors: missing subject for verb 'resonate' and wrong verb form (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: sentence structure and 9: past participle not applicable) — should be 'it replenishes my energy' (subject 'it', present tense, third person singular). 'Usually sketch of a cloud' has noun form and article issues (use plural 'sketches of clouds'). 'I love to do that activity' -> 'I love doing that activity' (verb + -ing form, Type 8). 'It's help me' needs third person singular present 'It helps me' (Type 2). 'Creative personality development' is awkward; use 'develops my creativity' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, Type 13). Suggestion: ensure each clause has a clear subject and correct verb form, use '-ing' after verbs like 'love' when describing activities, and choose correct noun forms for countable items.

× Yes, I clearly remembered that when I was a child I loved to paint with the different colors and different types of sketchy and it I enjoy it much.

✓ Yes, I clearly remember that when I was a child I loved to paint with different colors and different types of sketches, and I enjoyed it a lot.

Errors: 'clearly remembered' mixes past and present; the question asks about past so use 'I remember' to state memory (Type 6 present tense issue) or keep past consistently. Here choose present 'I clearly remember' (Type 6). 'the different colors' -> 'different colors' (article error, Type 22). 'types of sketchy' uses incorrect noun 'sketchy'; should be 'types of sketches' (incorrect use of adjectives/nouns, Type 13). 'it I enjoy it much' has word order and tense problems; change to 'I enjoyed it a lot' (past tense issue, Type 5) to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when recounting past events and use correct noun forms and adverb placement ('a lot').

× Yes, I prevail previously mentioned that I still enjoying sketching. It is my childhood hobby today. Nowadays also if I get a chance or time, I prefer to draw landscape and beautiful flowers and it help me to relax.

✓ Yes, I previously mentioned that I still enjoy sketching. It is my childhood hobby. Nowadays, if I get a chance, I prefer to draw landscapes and beautiful flowers, and it helps me to relax.

Errors: 'I prevail previously mentioned' uses wrong verb 'prevail' and wrong structure; use 'I previously mentioned' (Type 26 sentence structure). 'I still enjoying' needs base verb with auxiliary or simple present: 'I still enjoy' (Type 8 verb + -ing form). 'It is my childhood hobby today' awkward—'It is my childhood hobby' suffices (article/word order, Type 22/26). 'draw landscape' -> 'draw landscapes' (singular/plural issue, Type 1). 'it help me' -> 'it helps me' (third person singular issue, Type 2). Suggestion: use correct verb forms and plurality, remove redundant words, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, my mother and me share the same hobby of our gardening. Uh, she used to teach me about different scale of gardening, for example how to sow a tree, how to maintain a tree health and also how to pick the flowers when it fully grow.

✓ Yes, my mother and I share the same hobby of gardening. She used to teach me about different aspects of gardening, for example how to sow a tree, how to maintain a tree's health, and how to pick the flowers when they are fully grown.

Errors: 'my mother and me' should be 'my mother and I' as subject (Incorrect use of pronouns, Type 12). 'hobby of our gardening' is awkward; use 'hobby of gardening' or 'our gardening hobby' (article/structure, Type 22/26). 'different scale of gardening' -> 'different aspects of gardening' (incorrect word choice, Type 26). 'maintain a tree health' -> 'maintain a tree's health' (possessive error, Type 11 preposition/possessive). 'pick the flowers when it fully grow' has pronoun and verb agreement errors: 'it' should be 'they' for flowers (Type 12), and 'fully grow' should be 'are fully grown' (past participle as adjective, Type 9 and Type 6). Suggestion: use correct subject pronouns, possessive forms, plural agreement for plural nouns, and appropriate verb forms for state descriptions.