Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a slightly longer, more natural response with a topic sentence and one brief detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and vary vocabulary (e.g., "I enjoy...", "also"). Avoid lists without context.

Ejemplo: I enjoy watching movies and playing cricket. I like films because they help me relax, and I play cricket with friends on weekends to stay active and social.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, use correct tense (past), and give one specific supporting detail. Keep it short and coherent, using linking words like "so" or "also" if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had the same hobbies when I was a child. I used to watch cartoons and play cricket with my neighborhood friends every afternoon.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct grammar and a topic sentence (use present perfect for long-lasting hobbies: "I have had..."). Add one specific example or brief reason and use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had cricket as a hobby since childhood. I started playing when I was seven, and I still enjoy joining local matches on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then briefly explain using correct grammar and clearer reasons. Use linking words such as "because" or "however" and keep it to two or three short sentences.

Ejemplo: No, my family don't share my hobbies. They prefer studying and reading books, so they encouraged me to focus on my studies rather than playing cricket, although I still play sometimes.

× When was I am child when because same hobbies for me.

✓ When I was a child, I had the same hobbies.

The original sentence mixes tenses and uses wrong word order and auxiliary 'was' with 'am'. This is a present/past tense confusion. Use simple past 'was' for the state (I was a child) and 'had' for possession of hobbies. Rearrange to natural word order: 'When I was a child, I had the same hobbies.' Suggestion: keep time clause first, then past-tense main clause.

× When I watch childhood and my favorite hobbies are playing cricket foreground.

✓ Since my childhood, my favorite hobby has been playing cricket.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'watch' and awkward noun phrases like 'watch childhood' and 'foreground'. This is a tense and word choice problem. Use 'since my childhood' to indicate duration and present perfect 'has been' or simple past depending on context. 'Hobby' should be singular when listing a single favorite activity.

× No, my family not allowed to play in cricket because they are to learning and reading a book for me apart from that.

✓ No, my family did not allow me to play cricket because they wanted me to study and read books instead.

Multiple errors: missing auxiliary 'did' for past negative, incorrect use of 'in cricket', wrong verb forms 'are to learning', and unclear pronoun reference 'for me'. This sentence is mainly a subject-verb agreement and verb tense issue. Use past tense 'did not allow' for a past restriction, 'allow someone to do something' structure, and 'wanted me to study' for intent. Replace 'in cricket' with 'play cricket' and 'reading a book' with 'read books' for general activity.