Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (thời hiện tại đơn/động từ chia: 'improve' → 'improves'), rút gọn câu dài và tránh lặp ý. Thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ cách tập luyện của bạn (loại bài tập, thời lượng) và sử dụng từ nối để câu mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy going to the gym because it helps me stay fit and reduces stress. I usually work out three times a week, doing 45 minutes of cardio and 30 minutes of weight training, which improves my concentration and keeps me motivated.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt ('lying handshake' không rõ nghĩa; câu thứ hai thiếu chủ ngữ và thì phù hợp). Nên liệt kê rõ các hoạt động và giải thích ngắn gọn tại sao bạn thích chúng. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I used to play board games and play hand-clapping games with my friends, and I often rode my bike around the neighbourhood. I enjoyed these activities because they helped me make friends and kept me physically active.

Sugerencia: Cần tránh tiếng lắp và nói không rõ ý. Câu trả lời mâu thuẫn và thiếu cấu trúc; hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng bằng một hoặc hai câu cụ thể. Nếu không tiếp tục một sở thích từ nhỏ, hãy nói lí do rõ ràng (ví dụ: thay đổi sở thích, bận học).

Ejemplo: No, I don't. I haven't kept any single hobby since childhood because my interests have changed over the years and I often try new activities instead.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (possessive phrasing: 'each member has their own hobbies'; subject-verb agreement: 'my mom enjoys', 'my sister likes'). Tránh từ không phù hợp ('screaming' có lẽ sai ý). Nêu rõ hoạt động gia đình chung và tần suất làm cùng nhau, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Each member of my family has their own hobbies: my mother enjoys playing badminton, I prefer playing football, and my sister likes singing. Sometimes we don't all go for walks together on weekends, but we occasionally play sports or watch movies as a family.

× I usually work out three times a week which improve my concentration and keeps me motivated.

✓ I usually work out three times a week, which improves my concentration and keeps me motivated.

The relative clause refers to 'working out' (a singular activity), so verbs should be singular: 'improves' not 'improve'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement within the clause. Suggest using a comma before 'which' to join the clauses correctly.

× When I was a child, I used to play games with my friends, lying handshake and riding my bike around the neighborhood.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play games with my friends, play simple handshakes, and ride my bike around the neighborhood.

The list of activities should use parallel verb forms in the past habit structure 'used to': 'play', 'play', 'ride'. 'Lying handshake' is incorrect word choice and form. Use 'play simple handshakes' or 'play hand-clapping games' for clarity and correct grammar.

× Enjoy these activities because they helped me make friends and stay active.

✓ I enjoyed these activities because they helped me make friends and stay active.

Sentence lacks subject and tense consistency. The context is past ('when I was a child'), so use past tense 'I enjoyed' to match 'helped'. Adding the subject 'I' makes it a complete sentence.

× No I don't. My hobby is umm, train every period.

✓ No, I don't. My hobby is training all the time.

'Train every period' is unidiomatic. Use the gerund 'training' after 'is' to describe a hobby: 'My hobby is training'. 'Every period' is vague; 'all the time' or 'regularly' is clearer. Ensure punctuation after 'No'.

× Because I am probably, uh, boring with uh, every hobby.

✓ Because I probably get bored with every hobby.

Use 'get bored' to express becoming uninterested; 'boring' describes something that causes boredom. 'Probably' should come before the verb phrase. Remove filler 'uh'. Use correct verb form 'get bored' to match meaning.

× Each member of my family is their own hobbies, my mom enjoy playing badminton and I prefer playing football and my sister like screaming Sometime we won't go for a walk together on the weekends.

✓ Each member of my family has their own hobbies: my mom enjoys playing badminton, I prefer playing football, and my sister likes singing. Sometimes we don't go for walks together on the weekends.

Multiple issues: 'Each member ... has their own hobbies' uses 'has' not 'is'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('mom enjoys', 'sister likes'). 'Screaming' is incorrect word choice for 'singing'. Use plural 'walks' and correct 'Sometimes we don't' instead of 'Sometime we won't'. Also separate clauses with commas or colons and use parallel structure in the list of hobbies.