Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid fillers like “uh” and repetition (e.g., “sing songs”). Use slightly wider vocabulary (e.g., “favorite pastime”, “performing”).

Ejemplo: I have several hobbies, but my favorite pastime is singing and dancing. For example, I take weekly singing lessons and attend a dance class twice a week, which helps me improve my performance and stay fit.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer in past tense, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid awkward phrases like “draw drawings” and unnecessary repetition. Use correct tense and simple connectors (e.g., “when I was a child,” “so,” “because”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I enjoyed drawing a lot, because I liked creating stories with pictures; for instance, I used to spend hours sketching animals and scenes from books.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct sentence in present perfect or simple present to show continuity, then one specific supporting detail. Remove hesitation and repeated words. Use a linking word to connect past and present (e.g., “since” or “still”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have kept drawing since childhood. In fact, I still sketch regularly and have a small portfolio of childhood drawings that inspired my current style.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear, coherent reason with correct word choice and grammar. Avoid odd words (“hamburgers”) and vague phrases. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “however”) and one concrete example of differing interests.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t share the same hobbies as my family because we have different interests; for example, my parents prefer gardening and cooking, while I enjoy singing and dancing.

× Yes, I have many hobbies but my favorite hobby is singing and dancing. Uh because I love to sing songs and dance is my passion also.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies, but my favorite hobbies are singing and dancing because I love to sing and dance; they are my passions.

Incorrect use of singular/plural nouns and awkward phrasing. 'Favorite hobby is singing and dancing' mixes singular with two activities; use plural 'hobbies' and plural verb 'are'. Remove filler 'Uh' and redundant 'songs' after 'sing' and rephrase 'dance is my passion also' to 'they are my passions' for clarity.

× Yes, I have many hobbies. When I was child I like to draw drawings because drawing is my favorite activity, which I almost usually do in childhood.

✓ Yes, I had many hobbies. When I was a child I liked to draw because drawing was my favorite activity, which I did almost always in my childhood.

Tense inconsistency and article omission. The question asks about past habits, so use past tense 'had' and 'liked' instead of present. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'Draw drawings' is repetitive; 'draw' is sufficient. 'Almost usually' is redundant — use 'almost always' or 'usually' and place it correctly.

× Umm yes, I have copy of drawing which I had. I had some childhood and drawing. Drawing is drawing is now my hobby also.

✓ Umm yes, I have copies of the drawings that I made. I drew when I was a child. Drawing is still my hobby now.

Multiple structural and pluralization errors. 'Copy of drawing which I had' is unclear — use 'copies of the drawings that I made'. 'I had some childhood and drawing' is ungrammatical; express as 'I drew when I was a child.' Remove repetition 'Drawing is drawing is' and use 'still' to indicate continuation into present.

× No, I have no same hobbies as my family members because my family hamburgers has different type of mindset and they're different type of interest in other things. So I don't think.

✓ No, I do not have the same hobbies as my family members because my family has a different mindset and different interests. So I don't think so.

Several errors: 'I have no same hobbies' is unnatural — use 'I do not have the same hobbies'. 'Family hamburgers' is likely a word error; remove 'hamburgers'. 'Has' should agree with collective noun 'family' (singular or plural depending on variety) — here 'has' is acceptable but rest of sentence needs correction: 'different type of mindset' -> 'a different mindset' or 'different mindsets'; 'they're different type of interest' -> 'they have different interests'. Add 'so' to complete 'I don't think so.'