Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your hobby, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct names and simple description of why you like the artist.

Ejemplo: I enjoy listening to music, especially pop artists like Lady Gaga. I like her because she writes catchy songs and performs with dramatic costumes, which makes her concerts very memorable.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Remove fillers (uh, um) and correct grammar (past tense). Mention a specific example or achievement to illustrate your hobby.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to enjoy drawing when I was a child. I practiced every week and once I won a local drawing prize for a landscape I painted, which encouraged me to keep improving.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense. State when you started, how often you do it, and why you continue. Avoid trailing off; finish your sentences with a clear reason or result.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have been running since I was eight years old. I run three times a week to stay healthy and reduce stress, and it has helped me build stamina and confidence.

Sugerencia: Be specific about which hobbies you share and give a coherent description of the routine. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Explain briefly how you do the activity together.

Ejemplo: Yes, my husband and I share an interest in running. Every morning we go for a jog around our village, which helps us stay fit and spend time together.

× If my hobby is listening to music, for example, I like I like singer lady singer named Lady Gaga.

✓ If my hobby is listening to music, for example, I like a singer named Lady Gaga.

Redundant words and incorrect word order: 'I like I like singer lady singer' repeats and misorders noun phrases. Remove the repetition and use the article 'a' before 'singer'. Keep 'listening to music' as a gerund phrase. Suggestion: say 'I like a singer named Lady Gaga.'

× Lady Gaga usually usually send a Bala dejong.

✓ Lady Gaga usually sends ballad songs.

Several errors: repeated word 'usually', wrong verb form 'send' for third person singular, and unclear noun 'Bala dejong'. Likely intended 'ballad songs'. Use third person singular 'sends' for 'Lady Gaga'. Remove repetition. Suggestion: confirm intended noun and use 'usually sends ballad songs.'

× I like a.

✓ I like her songs.

Incomplete sentence: 'I like a.' lacks object and is ungrammatical. Provide a clear object such as 'her songs' or 'her music.' Suggestion: complete the thought with a noun phrase.

× Yes, uh, my, uh, when I was a child, I have a, uh, I have a hobby, uh, for example, I like a very, I like drawing a pictures very much because I usually drawing pictures, uh, for examples, I, I got a, a prize, uh, prize of drawing.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I had a hobby. For example, I liked drawing pictures very much because I usually drew pictures. For example, I got a prize for drawing.

Tense errors: mixing past ('was') with present 'have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'had', 'liked', 'drew', and 'got' because the time frame is childhood. Also article and plural errors: 'drawing a pictures' should be 'drawing pictures' and 'prize of drawing' -> 'prize for drawing'. Remove filler words. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently when referring to past habits or events.

× MMM, yes, I have, uh, I have, I have exercised running when I was a child, I since I was 8.

✓ Yes, I used to run when I was a child; I have been running since I was eight.

Mixed tense/confusing phrasing: 'I have exercised running when I was a child' mixes present perfect with past time. Two acceptable ways: (1) past habit: 'I used to run when I was a child.' (2) continuing activity from past to present: 'I have been running since I was eight.' Choose based on intended meaning. Also '8' should be spelled 'eight' in formal writing.

× Since I was 8, I I have run continually.

✓ Since I was eight, I have been running continuously.

When an action started in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect continuous: 'have been running'. Also use 'continuously' (adverb) not 'continually' depending on meaning; 'continuously' means without stopping. Remove duplicated 'I'. Spell out numbers in formal contexts.

× Running is a very.

✓ Running is very enjoyable.

Incomplete sentence: 'Running is a very.' lacks a noun or adjective complement. Add an adjective or noun phrase to complete the idea, such as 'very enjoyable' or 'a great hobby.' Suggestion: choose an appropriate adjective to finish the sentence.

× Yes, my husband has his same hobby he likes.

✓ Yes, my husband has the same hobby; he likes it.

Awkward phrasing and missing object: 'has his same hobby he likes' is redundant. Use 'the same hobby' and include 'it' as the object of 'likes'. Also add punctuation or conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: 'He likes it' or 'He enjoys it.'

× He likes learning very much.

✓ He likes learning very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× So every morning we ran, we run, we run, we run to around my village.

✓ So every morning we run around my village.

Inconsistent tense and repetition: mixing past 'ran' with present 'run' and repeating 'we run' is incorrect. For a habitual action use simple present 'we run.' Also 'to around my village' is incorrect preposition use; use 'around my village.' Remove repetitions. Suggestion: 'We run around my village every morning.'