Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains many grammar and word-choice mistakes, unclear phrases, and repetition. Aim to give one clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Replace unclear phrases (e.g. “Pin my laser time”, “haptic salute”) with simple accurate expressions. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same hobby without adding new information.

Ejemplo: I enjoy cooking and gardening. I like cooking because experimenting with recipes relaxes me and I can share meals with my family, and I garden to grow fresh herbs and flowers in my small balcony. Because both hobbies are calming, I usually spend an hour each evening on them.

Sugerencia: Your response communicates the idea but has many grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific detail (when/how often/with whom). Use correct past tense and avoid filler words. Connect sentences with linking words like “and” or “so” to make the answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I often played chess every evening with my younger brother. He was very good at the game, and we enjoyed competing because it helped me improve my thinking skills.

Sugerencia: This answer has the right content but weak grammar and word order. Use consistent tense (present perfect for ongoing hobbies) and more natural phrasing to show continuity. Provide one or two specific details about how the hobby has changed and use linking words like “however” or “now” to contrast past and present.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have played chess since I was a child. I used to play regularly with my younger brother, but now I am busier, so I usually play chess on my phone in my free time instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing with many incorrect words and unclear chronology. Make a single clear statement that you share a hobby, then give specific examples of how you and your family enjoy it, using correct tenses and vocabulary. Avoid unrelated or incorrect words (e.g. “used clothes”, “we both ate every night”). Use linking words like “for example” or “every” to structure the details.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I both enjoy gardening. For example, we often spend time together caring for our plants: we water them each morning and prune them in the evenings, which helps us relax and bond.

× Pin my laser time, I prefer to do activities like cooking and gardening.

✓ In my leisure time, I prefer to do activities like cooking and gardening.

The original sentence uses incorrect and unclear words ('Pin my laser time'). This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Replace with 'In my leisure time' to express free time correctly; 'prefer to do activities like' is fine. Ensure vocabulary matches intended meaning.

× It give me a very pleasure and whenever I cook it unwind all my haptic salute.

✓ It gives me great pleasure, and whenever I cook it helps me unwind and relax.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement ('It give' -> 'It gives'), incorrect noun phrase ('a very pleasure' -> 'great pleasure'), incorrect verbs and collocations ('unwind all my haptic salute' is meaningless). Replace with 'helps me unwind and relax' which correctly expresses the idea. Use singular verb form with singular subject and correct collocations.

× And gardening.

✓ I also enjoy gardening.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Convert to a complete sentence such as 'I also enjoy gardening' to clearly state the idea.

× Yes, I have hobby when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby when I was a child.

Tense and verb form errors: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child'; 'were' is incorrect for first person singular in past simple—use 'was'.

× It's playing chess.

✓ It was playing chess.

Pronoun reference and tense: referring to the hobby in past context requires past tense 'It was playing chess' or better 'My hobby was playing chess.' Use a full noun phrase for clarity.

× Uh, you regularly add every evening.

✓ I played regularly every evening.

Original is ungrammatical and uses wrong pronoun 'you'. Use past tense 'played' and adverb placement 'regularly every evening' to indicate habitual past action.

× I used to play chess with my younger brother and she's all He's also very good at chess.

✓ I used to play chess with my younger brother. He was also very good at chess.

Pronoun and tense confusion: 'she's all He's' is garbled. Use correct pronoun 'He' for brother and past tense 'was' to match 'used to'. Separate into two sentences for clarity.

× Yes, I had a hobby that I since my childhood there is a playing chess.

✓ Yes, I have had a hobby since my childhood: playing chess.

Tense and word order: 'had a hobby that I since my childhood there is a playing chess' is incorrect. Use present perfect 'have had' or simple present 'have' with 'since my childhood' to indicate a hobby continuing from childhood. Use colon or rephrase to 'playing chess.'

× In past I used to play chess with my younger brother but nowadays I due to busy schedule I don't able to time to play with him.

✓ In the past I used to play chess with my younger brother, but nowadays, due to a busy schedule, I am not able to find time to play with him.

Multiple tense and auxiliary errors: add article 'the' for 'In the past', insert commas, use 'due to a busy schedule' and correct negative ability 'I am not able to find time'. Maintain contrast between past habit and current situation.

× So whenever I get time I used to play chess in my phone.

✓ So whenever I get time, I play chess on my phone.

'Used to' indicates a past habit and conflicts with 'whenever I get time' (present). Use simple present 'I play' to describe current habit. Also use preposition 'on my phone' not 'in my phone'.

× Yes, I have a same hobby as my family member, also have my mother used clothes to do gardening and I also enjoy it very much.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobby as my family members. My mother used to do gardening and I also enjoy it very much.

Use definite article 'the same' and plural 'family members' if referring to more than one; 'used clothes to do gardening' is incorrect phrasing—use 'used to do gardening'. Separate into two sentences for clarity.

× We both ate every night, used to take care of our plants and every morning you used to give water to the plants and enjoy it very much.

✓ We both water our plants every night and take care of them; every morning we give water to the plants and enjoy it very much.

Original mixes past ('ate', 'used to') and second-person 'you'. Use present simple to describe current shared routine: 'we water our plants every night' and 'we give water every morning'. If intended as past habit, use consistent past forms: 'we used to water...' Ensure pronouns match subject.