Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答内容相关且有信息量，但有语法错误、冗余表达和句子不够简洁。注意时态与主谓一致（例如“it can help”应与前文主语一致），避免重复（“not bothered being bothered”重复且口语化），并使用连贯的连接词使表达更自然。可以把答案控制在一到三句内：主题句+一两条支持细节。

Ejemplo: I enjoy solving puzzles, especially jigsaw puzzles, because they help me relax and keep my mind sharp. They also allow me to focus and forget about other distractions.

Sugerencia: 回答展示了经历，但时态混用（现在与过去混杂），句子断裂且有停顿。应使用一致的过去时描述童年，并合并短句以减少碎片化，例如用连接词说明频率和场景。另外注意冠词和复数（on weekends）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to ride bicycles a lot as a child. I would ride home from school on weekdays and go to the park with my parents on weekends, which was a relaxing way for our family to spend time together.

Sugerencia: 回答内容完整但语法和表达不够自然。应使用现在完成时或过去完成时（e.g. have done/have been doing since），避免口头填充词（uh）和不自然比较（"child's stretching"）。把信息组织为主题句+频率+原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have been practising yoga since I was a child. I started attending classes with my mother, and I still go once a week because it helps me relax and keeps my body flexible.

Sugerencia: 回答抓住要点但有语法和流利度问题（例如“like to attending”应为“like attending”，多余停顿“we are go, we go”）。建议使用更自然的连接结构说明相似点与现状变化，并解释原因，控制在两到三句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I both enjoy yoga and used to attend classes together. However, since I now work in Taipei, we go to classes separately and rarely have the chance to practise together.

× Yes, I enjoy solving puzzles in my free time, especially jigsaw puzzles because they help me relax and keep my mind sharp, and moreover, it can help to concentrate on myself. And not bothered being bothered by other things.

✓ Yes, I enjoy solving puzzles in my free time, especially jigsaw puzzles, because they help me relax and keep my mind sharp. Moreover, they help me concentrate and stop being bothered by other things.

原句中代词与先行词不一致，前半句用复数主语“puzzles”，却在后半句用单数代词“it”。此外，句子结构冗长且含有不完整的短句“not bothered being bothered by other things”。建议统一使用复数代词“they”，并将句子拆分为两句以提高可读性；最后用完整的动词短语“stop being bothered”替代不完整表达。

× Yes, I like to ride bicycles. When I was a child. On weekdays I ride bicycles after I get back home from school and also on weekend I went out to parks to ride bicycles with my parents. It was a relaxing. Time to get together with my parents.

✓ Yes, I liked riding bicycles when I was a child. On weekdays I rode my bicycle after I got home from school, and on weekends I went to parks to ride with my parents. It was a relaxing time to get together with my parents.

原句存在数的一致问题和句子碎片。“When I was a child.”是一个不完整句子，应与上下文合并。复数/单数和时态也需一致：既然是在描述过去，应使用过去时（liked, rode, got）。此外“on weekend”应为复数形式“on weekends”，“go to parks”更自然为“went to parks”。把“It was a relaxing. Time...”合并为“It was a relaxing time”。

× Yes, I keep doing yoga since I was a child. At first I went to yoga class with my mother. It's easy for me that time because child's stretching is better than adults. For now, I will. Uh, for now, I go to yoga class once a week to help me relax my body.

✓ Yes, I have been doing yoga since I was a child. At first I went to yoga class with my mother. It was easy for me then because children are more flexible than adults. Currently, I go to yoga class once a week to help relax my body.

原句时态混用不当。“keep doing ... since”应改为现在完成进行时“have been doing ... since”表示从过去持续到现在。“It's easy for me that time”应该用过去时“was”并用更准确的表达“children are more flexible than adults”。“For now, I will. Uh, for now,”为冗余且不符合语法，删除多余词并用“Currently”连接现在时陈述。

× Yes, just like I said, my mother and I like to attending yoga class, but now we are go, we go to the class separately because I'm working in Taipei now, so we cannot go to the class together.

✓ Yes, just like I said, my mother and I like attending yoga classes, but now we go to classes separately because I'm working in Taipei, so we cannot go together.

原句中有多处问题：动词“like to attending”结构错误，应为“like attending”或“like to attend”。“we are go, we go”是重复且不合语法，应简化为“we go”。“yoga class”若指多次课程应使用复数“yoga classes”。同时去掉多余的“now”重复。建议使用简洁的句子结构并注意动词不定式与动名词的正确搭配。