Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus two specific supporting details. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Include specific reasons and examples (how badminton helps fitness; what you do when cafe-hopping).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a few hobbies. I often play badminton with my friends because it keeps me fit and helps me relieve stress after work. Also, I enjoy café-hopping with friends to try different desserts and relax in new atmospheres, especially on weekends.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently, avoid fragments, and give a clear reason or an example of a favourite show or memory. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child I loved watching TV series, especially Korean dramas, because they were exciting and sparked my imagination. For example, I used to watch family-friendly shows every evening, and I often pretended to be the characters with my friends.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning (sentence is unclear) and use correct tense and vocabulary. State the hobby clearly, explain how long you've had it, and give specific supporting details. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'since' or 'because'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed watching TV series since childhood. I still watch them now because they help me relax and often make me laugh, especially Korean comedies that I first discovered when I was ten.

Sugerencia: Be grammatically correct and specific: say which family member and what you do together. Use linking words and give one specific example of a café you visited or a dessert you tried. Keep it concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, my sister and I both enjoy café-hopping. We like discovering new cafés in our city and trying different desserts and specialty coffees; last month we visited a bakery-café famous for its matcha cake, which we both loved.

× Yes, I have several hobby that I like.

✓ Yes, I have several hobbies that I like.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural ('hobbies') because it is modified by 'several', which requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'several', 'many', 'few'.

× First I like to play badminton with my friends because it help me fit and I really enjoy when I play with my friends.

✓ First, I like to play badminton with my friends because it helps me stay fit, and I really enjoy playing with them.

The verb 'help' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it' so it should be 'helps'. Also 'fit' needs the verb 'stay' to form the phrase 'stay fit'. 'I really enjoy when I play' is awkward; use the gerund 'playing' or 'playing with them'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use gerunds after 'enjoy'.

× Second is a cafe hopping with friend because it help me relax and more enjoyable when.

✓ Second, I enjoy cafe hopping with friends because it helps me relax and is more enjoyable.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general activity. 'A cafe hopping' is incorrect; use 'cafe hopping' or 'going cafe hopping'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with 'it'. The sentence ending 'when' is incomplete; remove it or complete the clause. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and complete clauses.

× Yes, when I was young, I prefer to watch TV series like a Korean series because it's really.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I preferred to watch TV series, like Korean series, because they were really entertaining.

The timeframe 'when I was young' requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. Also 'a Korean series' is awkward; use 'Korean series' or 'a Korean series'. 'It's really' is incomplete; replace with 'they were really entertaining'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions and complete adjectives.

× Funny and make me into the the imaginary.

✓ They were funny and sparked my imagination.

This fragment lacks a subject and proper verb structure. 'Make me into the the imaginary' is ungrammatical; use 'sparked my imagination' or 'made me imagine things'. Also remove duplicate 'the'. Suggestion: use complete clauses with clear subjects and verbs.

× Yes, I have like to be Siri when I was young.

✓ Yes, I liked to be a Siri when I was young.

'Have like' is incorrect; use 'liked' in past tense for past habit. 'Be Siri' is unclear; if meaning 'be Siri' (a character or idol) add article 'a' or rephrase. Suggestion: use past tense 'liked' and clarify the noun with an article.

× I really want to watch TV series when I have a straight because it's make me relax and enjoy so much because it's very funny, especially Korean TV series is.

✓ I really wanted to watch TV series when I was stressed because they made me relax and enjoy myself a lot; Korean TV series are especially funny.

Multiple issues: tense mismatch ('want' should be past 'wanted' with past timeframe), 'have a straight' is incorrect phrase for 'was stressed', 'it's make' should be 'they made' to match plural 'series' and past tense, and 'especially Korean TV series is' should be 'Korean TV series are especially funny'. Suggestion: align verb tenses with time context, use correct collocations ('be stressed'), match plural verbs, and avoid repeated 'because'.

× Yes, my sister and I prefer to go out for cafe hopping very much because we like to export a new cafe and we love to eat desserts and coffee because it's make me.

✓ Yes, my sister and I really enjoy going out for cafe hopping because we like to explore new cafes, and we love eating desserts and drinking coffee because they make me happy.

Problems: 'prefer to go out for cafe hopping very much' is stylistically odd; use 'really enjoy going out for cafe hopping'. 'Export a new cafe' is wrong word choice; use 'explore new cafes'. 'Desserts and coffee' is plural, so refer to them with 'they' and use plural verb 'make'. 'It's make me' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('explore'), ensure pronoun agreement with plural nouns, and use appropriate adjectives ('happy').