Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct: state hobbies clearly in one topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and possessives (e.g., "reading books", not "reading our books"). Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I have two main hobbies: reading and dancing. I enjoy reading books because they expand my knowledge and improve my vocabulary, especially when I read novels and non-fiction. Also, I practice dancing regularly to stay fit and flexible, and I often join local classes to learn new styles.

Sugerencia: Use past simple for childhood and give clear supporting details with linking words. Start with a topic sentence in past tense (e.g., "Yes, I had..."), then add examples of activities or occasions. Avoid filler words like "umm" and correct grammar ("when I was a child", "I participated").

Ejemplo: Yes, I had two hobbies as a child: dancing and reading. I often participated in school functions and dance competitions, which helped me gain confidence. I also read a lot of storybooks before bed, which sparked my imagination and love of learning.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with clear tense: use present perfect or present perfect continuous to show a hobby continuing from childhood (e.g., "I've loved reading since I was a child"). Provide one concise reason or example. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I've loved reading since I was a child and I still read regularly. Reading has always helped me relax and learn new words, so I usually read novels and short stories in my free time. I also continue to dance occasionally, but reading is my longest-lasting hobby.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, single-topic sentence and then give a specific comparison or example. Use correct possessives and tenses ("my family", "my father loves dancing"). Avoid contradictions and unclear phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "also" or "however".

Ejemplo: Yes, some of my hobbies are similar to my family's. For example, my father loves dancing, and I enjoy dancing with him at family gatherings. However, I also like reading, which not everyone in my family does, so I often read on my own.

× First one, I love to reading our books.

✓ First, I love reading books.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' (love + -ing). Also 'one' is unnecessary; use 'First' and 'our books' is unnatural in this context, so use 'books'. Suggestion: use 'I love reading books.'

× It's helped to improve our mind and develop and developed our skill.

✓ It helps to improve our minds and develop our skills.

Mixed tenses and subject-verb agreement errors. Use present tense 'helps' to match general statement. 'Mind' and 'skill' need plural 'minds' and 'skills' to match 'our'. Remove redundant 'developed'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and plural forms: 'It helps to improve our minds and develop our skills.'

× And another one, I love dancing.

✓ Another hobby I love is dancing.

Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal; structure the sentence to clearly state the hobby. Use noun phrase 'hobby' and verb 'is' for clarity. Suggestion: 'Another hobby I love is dancing.'

× It keeps me fit and flexibility and exercise my body.

✓ It keeps me fit, improves my flexibility, and exercises my body.

Mixing noun 'flexibility' with verb forms causes imbalance. Use parallel verbs: 'keeps', 'improves', 'exercises'. Use commas to separate items. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure: 'keeps me fit, improves my flexibility, and exercises my body.'

× Yeah, when I am child I have two hobbies.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child I had two hobbies.

Talking about childhood requires past tense: 'was' instead of 'am' and 'had' instead of 'have'. Also include article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: 'When I was a child, I had two hobbies.'

× First I love dancing, umm when I was studied I participate every function and another one I love to reading our books.

✓ First, I loved dancing. When I was studying, I participated in every function. I also loved reading books.

Multiple tense issues: describe past habits in past tense ('loved', 'was studying', 'participated'). Use 'participated in' with correct preposition and gerund 'reading' without 'to'. Remove 'our'. Suggestion: break into sentences and use past tense for childhood activities.

× Yes, since childhood I had a same hobby.

✓ Yes, since childhood I have had the same hobby.

'Since childhood' requires present perfect ('have had') to describe an action continuing to present. Use 'the same hobby' not 'a same hobby'. Suggestion: 'Since childhood, I have had the same hobby.'

× Now this time I love to reading a book.

✓ Now I love reading books.

Use gerund after 'love' (love + -ing) and natural plural 'books' for general preference. Remove unnecessary 'this time' and article for general statement. Suggestion: 'Now I love reading books.'

× And I never changed my hobbies.

✓ And I have never changed my hobbies.

Use present perfect 'have never changed' to indicate action from past to present. Alternatively remove 'And' at start. Suggestion: 'I have never changed my hobbies.'

× I like dancing and playing and.

✓ I like dancing and playing.

Sentence ends with extraneous 'and.' Remove trailing conjunction to complete the list. Suggestion: 'I like dancing and playing.'

× I have the same fun hobbies my families, my father loved dancing and I also love dancing and I did do I didn't know they liked to read read a book but I loves reading a book.

✓ I have the same hobbies as my family. My father loves dancing and I also love dancing. I didn't know they liked to read, but I love reading books.

Multiple errors: use 'the same ... as' structure, 'family' is singular collective, verb agreement 'loves' for father, remove extra words 'did do', correct tense 'didn't know', use plural 'books' and correct verb 'love'. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: split into sentences, fix subject-verb agreement and article usage: 'I have the same hobbies as my family. My father loves dancing and I also love dancing. I didn't know they liked to read, but I love reading books.'