Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct verb/noun forms (e.g., 'a hobby', 'I want to be an actress').

Ejemplo: I do have a hobby: I attend a theatre class. In addition, I love cinema and the whole theatre life, and I want to become an actress one day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about childhood and use correct tense and phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'Yes, as a child...'), then give a specific example or reason, using linking words like 'and' or 'but' appropriately. Correct plural/singular and verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, as a child I was already interested in performing arts. For example, I took dance lessons and joined school plays, but I enjoyed theatre more because I loved acting in stories.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence and specific supporting details about duration or activities, using coherent linking words. Avoid informal phrases like 'for forever' and phrasing like 'I think you understood it.' Use precise time expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I have attended a theatre class since I was a child, so it has been my favorite hobby for many years. I still practice acting techniques and participate in local productions.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and politely, using a clear topic sentence and a reason or example. Avoid colloquial fillers like 'By the way' and vague phrases. Use connecting words to explain feelings or consequences.

Ejemplo: No, my family members do not share my interest in theatre. I find it a bit disappointing because I have no one at home to discuss plays with, so I usually talk about theatre with friends or classmates instead.

× Yes, I have hobby and it's so strange, but I love theater class, I love theater life, cinema and I wanna be actress.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby and it's so strange, but I love theater classes, I love theater life, cinema, and I want to be an actress.

Missing indefinite article before singular countable noun 'hobby' (use 'a hobby'). 'Theater class' likely plural or general hobby -> 'theater classes'. Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech. Missing indefinite article before 'actress' -> 'an actress'. Also add commas for clarity.

× When I was born, I understood that I love theater and I wanna be actors and yes, I love dance, but theater I love more than dance, of course.

✓ When I was young, I realized that I loved theater and I wanted to be an actor, and yes, I loved dance, but I loved theater more than dance, of course.

The original uses incorrect time reference 'When I was born' and mixes tenses. 'When I was born' is wrong for realizing something; use 'When I was young'. 'Understood' could be 'realized'. Use past tense consistently for childhood events: 'realized', 'loved', 'wanted'. 'Actors' is plural but subject 'I' requires singular 'an actor'. Also replace informal 'wanna' with 'wanted to'.

× Without a doubt. I have a theater class and it's my favorite hobby for forever and I think you understood it.

✓ Without a doubt. I take a theater class and it's been my favorite hobby forever, and I think you understand that.

Use present continuous 'take a theater class' (or 'attend a theater class') for current activity. 'For forever' is nonstandard; use 'forever' with perfect tense: 'it's been my favorite hobby forever.' 'I think you understood it' mixes tenses; use present 'you understand' to refer to the current listener.

× By the way, nobody in my family likes theater and it's so sad because I can't tell someone in my family how it's cool.

✓ By the way, nobody in my family likes theater and it's so sad because I can't tell anyone in my family how cool it is.

Use 'anyone' not 'someone' after negative 'can't'. Word order for 'how cool it is' should place subject 'it' before verb 'is'. This corrects pronoun choice and standard English word order.