Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
I thought the years I was chatting with my friends because most of my friends live in the abroad and we have a long distance to meet and the chatting is to keep our relationship and it helps us to speak with each other.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Most of the time I chatting with them about our daily routine because it's very interesting for us and most of the time we speak about the our birthday or some festivals.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
From my perspective, both of them are vital for you people but I prefer to chatting with my only one friend because it's a give me good emotion and I can speak about any topic with him and I can comfortable when I chatting with him.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I think they doing the communicate with the facilities. It's very vital for every people because this time you can appreciate your emotions and you can speak in natural. It's also help you to understood your emotions.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
As of the years I have many kind of friends and I try to argue with him because when I argue with them they can help me in some hard news and also I try to help them in their hands.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Gaplaringizni kamaytiring va gaplarni aniq tuzing. Savolga qisqaroq, to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob bering, keyin bir-ikki qo‘shimcha dalil bilan mustahkamlang. Masalan: hozirgi zamonda va sodda tuzilmalarni ishlating, noto‘g‘ri artikllar va so‘z tartibini tuzating (masalan, "in the abroad" emas, "abroad"). Iboralarni qismlarga bo‘lib, bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning (because, so, therefore).
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Most of my friends live abroad, so we often chat to keep in touch. Chatting helps us maintain our relationship and share news despite the distance.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: Gapni oddiy va aniqlashtiring: mavzuni boshlovchi gap (topic sentence) va bitta yoki ikki qo‘shimcha misol keltiring. Grammatikani tuzating (I chat, not I chatting). Takrorni kamaytiring ("most of the time" bir marta yetarli).
Ejemplo: We usually chat about our daily routines. For example, we talk about work, what we cooked, and sometimes we discuss upcoming birthdays or festivals.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Javobni qisqaroq va lo‘nda qiling: avvalo aniq qaysini afzal ko‘rishingizni ayting, so‘ng sababini bitta yoki ikki aniq sabab bilan tushuntiring. Fe’llarni to‘g‘ri shaklda ishlating (I prefer chatting with one friend). His-tuyg‘ularni izohlang, lekin umumiy iboralarni aniqlashtiring ("good emotion" o‘rniga "comfortable" yoki "more relaxed").
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and can talk about personal topics in depth.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Javobni oddiy va mantiqiy qiling: avval qaysi usulni afzal ko‘rishingizni ayting, so‘ng ikkita aniq sabab keltiring. Grammatik xatolar (they doing, appreciate your emotions) va noaniq jumlalarni tuzating. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning (because, so, although).
Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read body language and emotions more easily. However, social media is useful when meeting in person is not possible.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Javobni aniq qilib qayta tuzing: "Do you argue?" savoliga to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob bering (yes/no/sometimes), so‘ng sabab va misol bilan izohlang. "Argue" so‘zining ma'nosini aniq ishlating — do‘stlar bilan bahslar odatda fikr almashish maqsadida bo‘ladi. Noto‘g‘ri iboralarni tuzating ("help them in their hands" noaniq).
Ejemplo: Sometimes we argue, but usually it is a friendly disagreement. For example, we might debate plans or opinions, and afterwards we support each other when one of us has a problem.
× I thought the years I was chatting with my friends because most of my friends live in the abroad and we have a long distance to meet and the chatting is to keep our relationship and it helps us to speak with each other.
✓ I have been chatting with my friends for years because most of them live abroad, so we are far apart and chatting helps us maintain our relationships and keep in touch.
The original sentence uses incorrect past tense 'I thought' and awkward continuous tense 'I was chatting' for an action that continues to the present. Use present perfect 'have been chatting' for an action starting in the past and continuing now. 'the abroad' is incorrect; use 'abroad' without article. 'a long distance to meet' is unnatural; use 'we are far apart'. Replace 'the chatting is to keep our relationship' with 'chatting helps us maintain our relationships' and 'it helps us to speak with each other' with 'keep in touch'. Suggestions: use present perfect for ongoing past-to-present actions, remove unnecessary articles, and simplify phrases for clarity.
× Most of the time I chatting with them about our daily routine because it's very interesting for us and most of the time we speak about the our birthday or some festivals.
✓ Most of the time I chat with them about our daily routines because it's very interesting for us, and often we talk about our birthdays or some festivals.
'I chatting' is incorrect; after a subject you need the base verb 'chat' for present simple, so use 'I chat' for habitual actions. 'daily routine' should be plural 'daily routines' when referring to different people's routines. 'we speak about the our birthday' has an extra article 'the' and should be 'our birthdays'. Use 'often' instead of repeating 'most of the time'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions and ensure correct article and plural usage.
× From my perspective, both of them are vital for you people but I prefer to chatting with my only one friend because it's a give me good emotion and I can speak about any topic with him and I can comfortable when I chatting with him.
✓ From my perspective, both are important for people, but I prefer chatting with just one friend because it gives me good feelings, and I can talk about any topic with him and feel comfortable when I chat with him.
'both of them are vital for you people' is awkward and uses incorrect pronouns; 'both are important for people' is clearer. 'I prefer to chatting' wrongly combines 'to' with gerund; use 'prefer chatting' or 'prefer to chat'. 'my only one friend' should be 'just one friend'. 'it's a give me good emotion' should be 'it gives me good feelings'. 'I can comfortable' incorrectly uses adjective instead of verb phrase; use 'feel comfortable'. 'when I chatting' again requires 'chat' or 'am chatting' depending on tense; use 'chat' for habitual. Suggestions: choose correct verb forms after 'prefer', use 'feel comfortable', and simplify pronoun usage.
× I think they doing the communicate with the facilities. It's very vital for every people because this time you can appreciate your emotions and you can speak in natural. It's also help you to understood your emotions.
✓ I think they use communication tools and facilities. It's very important for everyone because you can express your emotions and speak naturally. It also helps you understand your feelings.
'they doing the communicate' is ungrammatical; use 'they use communication' or 'they use communication tools'. 'the facilities' is unclear; 'facilities' or 'tools' works. 'very vital for every people' should be 'very important for everyone'. 'appreciate your emotions' is incorrect collocation; use 'express your emotions'. 'speak in natural' should be 'speak naturally' (adverb). 'It's also help you to understood' mixes forms: use 'It also helps you understand' (present simple + base verb). Suggestions: use correct verb forms, choose correct collocations (express emotions), and use adverbs correctly.
× As of the years I have many kind of friends and I try to argue with him because when I argue with them they can help me in some hard news and also I try to help them in their hands.
✓ Over the years I have had many kinds of friends, and I try not to argue with them because when I have arguments they can help me with difficult news, and I also try to help them.
'As of the years' is incorrect time expression; use 'Over the years'. 'I have many kind of friends' needs pluralization: 'many kinds of friends' or 'many kinds of friends' and 'have had' for experience over time; present perfect 'have had' is better. 'I try to argue with him' contradicts the rest and has wrong pronoun; likely intended 'try not to argue with them'. 'help me in some hard news' is unnatural; use 'help me with difficult news'. 'help them in their hands' is unclear; use 'help them'. Suggestions: use correct time expressions, consistent pronouns, avoid literal translations like 'in their hands', and select appropriate verb forms (present perfect for experience).