Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và sự mạch lạc: sửa lỗi động từ (enjoy -> enjoy/actually enjoying), cụm từ không tự nhiên (leave my mood), dùng từ cụ thể và rút gọn câu dài thừa. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tiếp theo 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ nơi gặp, chủ đề nói), dùng liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, we often meet at a nearby coffee shop to talk about recent events and share memories, which gives me new perspectives on their lives.

Sugerencia: Làm rõ chủ đề chính và đưa chi tiết cụ thể, sửa cấu trúc lặp và ngữ pháp (we are we are work -> we are working/are at work), tránh từ mơ hồ như 'like this'. Nên dùng liên từ để nối ý và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về đề tài trò chuyện.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about work and personal matters. For instance, we discuss challenges at the office, plans for marriage, and how to balance work and family life, which helps me learn from their experiences.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi số ít/số nhiều và ngữ pháp (one friends -> one friend; one people -> one person). Trình bày rõ lí do trong một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết bằng 1–2 câu hỗ trợ, dùng liên từ để tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I'm introverted. When I talk one-on-one, I can have deeper conversations and better understand their perspective, which feels more meaningful to me.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ngữ pháp; sửa các cụm từ không chính xác (have a touch via social media, when I on don't have free time I use). Nên nói rõ lựa chọn chia theo tình huống với cấu trúc rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể về nền tảng hoặc hoàn cảnh.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I'm busy, I prefer social media apps like Messenger because they're convenient for quick messages. But if I have time, I prefer face-to-face meetings since they feel more personal.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp (hear their their own perspective, sharing my sharing). Nên trả lời thẳng câu hỏi bằng câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung lý do và ví dụ ngắn về cách xử lý mâu thuẫn (lắng nghe, thảo luận ôn hòa).

Ejemplo: Not really. I'm usually quiet and prefer to listen rather than argue. If disagreements arise, I try to understand their point of view and discuss calmly to find a compromise.

× I'm really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and leave my mood.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and lifts my mood.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in base form after 'I' (present simple): 'I enjoy'. 'I'm really enjoy' incorrectly combines present continuous with a stative verb. Also 'leave my mood' is incorrect; use 'lifts my mood' to express improving mood.

× I often go to the coffee shop and hang out with them to share memory and have more perspective about their life and their experience in their.

✓ I often go to the coffee shop and hang out with them to share memories and gain more perspective about their lives and their experiences.

Use plural 'memories' and 'lives' to match plural 'them'. 'Have more perspective about' is awkward; use 'gain more perspective about'. Remove incorrect trailing preposition 'in their' and change 'experience' to plural 'experiences'.

× Maybe about work and perspective in some issue since we are we are work and mature right now.

✓ Maybe about work and perspectives on certain issues since we are working and are more mature now.

Redundant 'we are we are' fixed. 'Perspective in some issue' corrected to 'perspectives on certain issues'. Use present participle 'working' and 'more mature' to convey current state.

× So their issues may be the life, marriage, life like this it helps me.

✓ So their issues may be about life, marriage, and similar topics; this helps me.

Replace vague 'the life' with 'about life' and add 'and similar topics' for 'life like this'. Separate clauses with a semicolon or period. Use 'this helps me' to clarify subject.

× If I had to choose, maybe. I love to chat with only one friends.

✓ If I had to choose, maybe. I love to chat with only one friend.

Use singular 'friend' to agree with 'one'. 'Friends' (plural) conflicts with 'one'.

× I'm an introverted person so I just want to chat with one people.

✓ I'm an introverted person so I just want to chat with one person.

Use 'person' not 'people' when referring to a single individual. 'People' is plural.

× I can learn more perspective from them and helps them live their mood.

✓ I can learn more perspectives from them and help them improve their mood.

After 'I', verbs should be base form: 'help' not 'helps'. Use plural 'perspectives'. 'Live their mood' is incorrect; use 'improve their mood'.

× Whenever I am overwhelmed by my time schedule, I often have a touch via social media is so helpful and convenient.

✓ Whenever I am overwhelmed by my schedule, I often get in touch via social media; it is very helpful and convenient.

Use 'get in touch' rather than 'have a touch'. 'Time schedule' simplified to 'schedule'. Split into two clauses: contacting via social media and assessment 'it is very helpful'.

× But when I on don't have free time I use.

✓ But when I don't have free time, I don't use it.

Original word order 'I on don't' is incorrect. Clarify what 'use' refers to; here likely 'use social media', so better: 'But when I don't have free time, I don't use social media.' Ensure object present. Adjust word order and include commas.

× Well not much, I'm just an introverted person so I just hear their their own perspective despite sharing my sharing my perspective.

✓ Well, not much. I'm just an introverted person, so I just hear their perspectives rather than sharing my own.

Fix repetition 'their their' and 'sharing my sharing my'. Use plural 'perspectives'. Order 'sharing my own' is correct. Punctuation added.

× So I think I didn't have to argue with them, just listen.

✓ So I don't think I have to argue with them; I just listen.

Use present tense to express habitual or general truth: 'I don't think I have to'. 'Didn't have to' implies past necessity. Replace comma with semicolon for clause separation.