Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is short and contains inaccuracies and odd phrasing ("getting it fresh", "keeps our bones stronger") which makes it unnatural and confusing. Give a direct, relevant topic sentence and one or two clear reasons with simple linking words. Avoid unrelated metaphors. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, talking after a busy day makes me feel less stressed and more supported.

Sugerencia: Your answer has useful content but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific, well-structured details using linking words (for example, "for instance", "also"). Correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ejemplo: I usually talk about daily life and future plans with my friends. For instance, we discuss how our day went, our career goals, and plans for trips or weekend meet-ups.

Sugerencia: You answered directly and gave a reason, but there are grammar errors and hesitations. Use a clear topic sentence, then one supporting reason with correct verb forms and smoother linking words ("because", "so"). Avoid filler sounds like "uh". Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because we can make plans together more easily. For example, when four of us want to organise a trip or a weekend meeting, group chat helps coordinate times and ideas.

Sugerencia: Good clear preference, but phrasing is awkward and partially repetitive. Use one concise topic sentence, then add a specific reason using linking words ("because", "therefore"). Use correct vocabulary ("in person" instead of "face to face" repeatedly, and "strengthen our bonds").

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate in person because meeting face to face helps build stronger relationships. For example, seeing someone's expressions and hearing their tone makes conversations more meaningful than texts.

Sugerencia: You answered directly but your response is repetitive and lacks detail. Provide a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a linking word ("for example", "when"). Mention how you handle disagreements to show maturity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when we disagree about plans or school assignments. For example, if someone opposes my proposal for a group project, I discuss my reasons calmly and try to find a compromise.

× Yes, I like getting it fresh because it keeps our bones stronger.

✓ Yes, I like getting fresh because it keeps our bones strong.

The phrase 'getting it fresh' is incorrect: 'it' is unnecessary and 'fresh' should modify the subject directly. Also 'keeps our bones stronger' uses comparative 'stronger' without a reference; use the simple adjective 'strong'. Use 'getting fresh' to mean becoming refreshed and 'keeps our bones strong' for general state.

× Yes, I mostly chat about the about to know their house, their their day goes and how's their life is, how their life goes and about their goals, about their future, about our planning, about our trips.

✓ I mostly chat about getting to know their home, how their day goes and how their life is, their goals and future, our plans, and our trips.

The original sentence has repetition, incorrect word order and extra words (eg 'about the about to know', duplicate 'their', 'how's their life is'). Correct by removing duplicates, using 'getting to know' for becoming familiar, 'home' instead of 'house' fits context, and 'plans' rather than 'planning'. Use parallel structure for the listed items.

× This type of charts we also does with our friends.

✓ We also have these kinds of chats with our friends.

'This type of charts' is mixed singular/plural and 'does' does not agree with plural subject. Use plural 'these kinds of chats' and plural verb 'have'. Also 'chat' as noun 'chats' fits better.

× Yes I do. I prefer chat with uh chat with a group of people because we have 4 friends and if we having have any plan of travelling or on a weekend meet ups we can chat in a group.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have four friends and if we have any travel plans or weekend meetups we can discuss them in the group.

'Prefer chat' should be 'prefer chatting' (verb + -ing). Remove filler 'uh' and fix 'we having have' to 'we have'. Use 'travel plans' and 'weekend meetups' as nouns, and 'discuss them in the group' clarifies purpose.

× So I think I prefer group of people can chat easily.

✓ So I think chatting in a group is easier.

Original has incorrect word order and missing articles. Simplify to a clear comparative statement: 'chatting in a group is easier'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face, not trivia social media because we are social in face to face and commuting with friends gives our bond, make our bonds stronger.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, not via social media, because meeting friends in person strengthens our bond.

'Trivia social media' is wrong; use 'via social media'. 'We are social in face to face' is awkward; use 'meeting friends in person'. 'Commuting' is incorrect; use 'meeting' or 'spending time'. Use singular 'bond' or plural consistently; 'strengthens our bond' is natural.

× Yes, I mostly argue with friends when they don't agree with my plan or my topic or my exam assignment.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when they don't agree with my plans, topics, or assignments.

Tense mostly okay but adverb 'mostly' is odd; 'sometimes' fits better. Pluralize 'plan' and 'topic' for parallelism and replace 'exam assignment' with 'assignments'. Keep present tense for habitual actions.

× So at that time I also argue with my friends.

✓ So at those times I argue with my friends too.

Use 'those times' to refer to repeated occasions rather than 'that time'. Place 'too' for natural adverb placement. Maintain present tense for habitual behavior.