Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends.") then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, and). Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repeated words. Use correct verb forms and possessives (e.g., "when I chat" not "when I chatting").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us stay connected and understand each other's feelings. For example, we often share interesting stories or news, which cheers me up and strengthens our friendship.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Begin with a topic sentence like "We usually talk about daily life and current events." Then give specific examples and use linking words (for example, such as). Correct grammar (e.g., "interesting things", "workplace", "they give comments"). Remove irrelevant words ("Cortana", "that's a good truth").

Ejemplo: We usually talk about daily life and recent news. For example, I often tell friends about things that happen at work or interesting articles I read, and they usually respond with comments and advice.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference sentence then support it with concise reasons using linking words (because, while, however). Use correct grammar ("I prefer to chat with one friend" not "they do prefer"). Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Provide a brief contrasting point for balance.

Ejemplo: I prefer to chat with one friend because conversations can be more detailed and I can listen carefully to what they say. However, group chats are lively and good for sharing ideas with several people.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary ("facial expressions", "body language") and grammar ("I can notice others' emotions"). Avoid vague statements and fillers. If mentioning social media, explain a clear drawback or benefit briefly.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can notice others' facial expressions and body language, which makes their feelings easier to understand. In contrast, social media can cause misunderstandings because tone and nonverbal cues are missing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer reasoning. Start with "Yes, sometimes" then explain why (because of different opinions) and what happens afterward (we discuss and resolve it). Use linking words (when, because, after) and avoid contradictory or confusing phrases. Clarify how arguing can improve relationships.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. However, we usually discuss our points calmly afterwards, and resolving disagreements helps improve our understanding and strengthen the friendship.

× Yes, I do because when I chatting with my friends, we can go to, uh, different connection in the process.

✓ Yes, I do because when I chat with my friends, we can make different connections in the process.

The verb following 'when' requires the base form in simple present (chat), not the -ing form 'chatting'. Also 'connection' should be plural 'connections' to match 'different'. Use 'make different connections' to sound natural.

× Like we can know each other, what they are feeling they're thinking and we can share different interesting things and make us to feel better or good in the process.

✓ For example, we can get to know each other, know what they are feeling and thinking, and share interesting things that make us feel better during the process.

'Know each other' needs 'get to' for clarity. 'What they are feeling they're thinking' is ungrammatical; separate clauses needed: 'what they are feeling and thinking'. 'Make us to feel' is incorrect; use 'make us feel'. Also avoid redundant words like 'different' with 'interesting' here.

× Cortana, I think it is my daily life or something interesting things.

✓ I usually talk about my daily life or interesting things.

'Something interesting things' mixes singular 'something' with plural 'things'. Use either 'something interesting' or 'interesting things'. Also 'it is my daily life' is awkward; 'I usually talk about' fits the question.

× What I miss this are what I see this lies, uh, my workplace, what will happen or something interesting news.

✓ What I mention are things I see, such as news about my workplace, what will happen there, or other interesting news.

Pronouns and structure are confused: 'What I miss this are what I see this lies' is ungrammatical. Use 'what I mention' or 'what I talk about', and clarify noun phrases: 'news about my workplace' and 'what will happen there'.

× I will share it with my friends and they will got some response and comments for that.

✓ I will share it with my friends and they will get some responses and comments on it.

'Will got' is incorrect because modal 'will' must be followed by base verb 'get', not past tense 'got'. Also use plural 'responses' and 'comments', and 'on it' or 'about it' is more natural than 'for that'.

× That's a good truth.

✓ That's a good thing.

'Good truth' is unnatural in English. 'Thing' or 'point' is more idiomatic to express approval of the previous statement.

× They do prefer to chat with one friends because if I chat with one friends, we can talk about, uh, more detailed and I can try to listen, umm, just one, one person.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend because if I chat with one friend, we can talk in more detail and I can focus on listening to just one person.

Pronoun/person confusion: the question asks about the student, so use 'I' not 'They'. 'One friends' is wrong: singular 'friend'. 'More detailed' should be 'in more detail'. Use 'focus on listening to' for clarity.

× They what they want to share.

✓ to hear what they want to share.

Fragment: 'They what they want to share' lacks a verb and subject alignment. Replace with 'to hear what they want to share' to complete the infinitive phrase tied to previous sentence.

× But if, uh, taught in a group, we need I need to listen to different people.

✓ But if I am in a group, I need to listen to different people.

'Taught in a group' is wrong verb; likely intended 'thought' or 'talked', but correct phrase is 'if I am in a group'. Remove duplication 'we need I need'.

× Maybe I you let me to forgot someone what they're talking.

✓ Maybe I'll forget what someone is talking about.

Mixed pronouns 'I you let me' are incorrect. Use contraction 'I'll' or 'I will' and correct verb 'forget' (not 'forgot'). 'What they're talking' needs 'what someone is talking about'.

× Face to face because, uh, when I communicate with other face to face, I can note others, uh, uh, they, they, they emotionals and they, their face and their body language for that is easy to understand others.

✓ Face to face, because when I communicate with others face to face, I can notice their emotions, facial expressions, and body language, which makes it easy to understand them.

Use plural 'others' and 'notice' instead of 'note'. 'They, they, they emotionals' is ungrammatical; use 'their emotions'. 'Their face and their body language' -> 'facial expressions and body language'. Use relative clause 'which makes it easy to understand them.'

× But in the social media I, it will be easy to make the thing understanding.

✓ But on social media, it can be harder to understand things.

'In the social media I, it will be easy to make the thing understanding' is ungrammatical and contradicts intended meaning. Use preposition 'on social media' and express difficulty: 'it can be harder to understand things.'

× MMM, yes, I do because maybe for some, umm, for some time we have some different option, uh, opinions for that moment or difference.

✓ Yes, I do, because sometimes we have different opinions at certain times.

'Maybe for some, for some time' is wordy; 'sometimes' is concise. 'Different option' should be 'different opinions'. Avoid redundant phrases like 'for that moment or difference.'

× Uh, then we will, it can't be argued.

✓ Then we may not be able to resolve them by arguing.

'We will, it can't be argued' mixes clauses incorrectly. Use modal 'may not be able to' to express possibility and 'resolve by arguing' to clarify meaning.

× Maybe I, I just, uh, maybe it can't be discussed for that.

✓ Maybe we just can't discuss it at that time.

Confusing repetition and pronoun use. Use 'we' and simplify: 'can't discuss it at that time.'

× And then it's a good process for us to, uh, increase our relationship.

✓ And then it's a good process for us to improve our relationship.

'Increase our relationship' is unnatural; use 'improve our relationship' to convey strengthening. Present tense 'it's' is fine; 'improve' matches.