Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends regularly because it helps me stay connected and understand them better. For example, we often share our daily experiences and support each other.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples of topics you discuss. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about important matters, such as planning events or asking for help. For instance, we often use Messenger or Facebook to coordinate our schedules or share useful information.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer clearer and more fluent. Begin with a direct response and explain your preference with specific reasons or examples, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer both chatting with a group and with a single friend, depending on the situation. For example, I chat with groups when planning events, but I contact individual friends when I need personal advice.

Sugerencia: Reduce filler words and clarify your reasons for preferring social media. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and energetic for me. Additionally, heavy traffic in my area makes face-to-face meetings difficult, so I often use phone calls or messaging apps to stay in touch.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition and filler words. Start with a direct answer and explain how you resolve disagreements with specific details, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, we usually discuss our points calmly and reach a mutual agreement in the end.

× Yes, I like to do chatting with my friends, uh, more often.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends more often.

The phrase 'like to do chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund and does not need 'to do'. The correct form is 'like chatting'.

× I do chat with them uh, for my personal reasons and for, for knowing them better.

✓ I chat with them for personal reasons and to get to know them better.

The phrase 'for knowing them better' is incorrect; 'to get to know them better' is the proper infinitive form to express purpose.

× Maximum time I chat with my friends for my necessary things and whenever I require something from them.

✓ Most of the time, I chat with my friends about necessary things and whenever I need something from them.

'Maximum time' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'most of the time'. Also, 'require' is better replaced with 'need' in this context.

× And whenever they require something from me they text me through over the messenger or Facebook or any other apps.

✓ And whenever they need something from me, they text me through Messenger, Facebook, or other apps.

The phrase 'through over the messenger' is incorrect; 'through Messenger' or 'via Messenger' is correct. Also, 'require' is better replaced with 'need' here.

× So more often we have chatted with each other for our requirements.

✓ So, more often we chat with each other for our needs.

The present perfect 'have chatted' is unnecessary here; simple present 'chat' fits better. Also, 'requirements' is better replaced with 'needs' in this context.

× I'll have to both, I'll have to do the, uh, both, both of the things, uh, umm, it depends on my, uh, requirements.

✓ I have to do both; it depends on my requirements.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying to 'I have to do both' improves clarity and grammar.

× If I need something, uh, from a bunch of, from bunch of a group, a bunch of people from a group, then umm, uh, I would love to do that.

✓ If I need something from a group of people, then I would love to do that.

The phrase 'from a bunch of, from bunch of a group' is redundant and incorrect. 'From a group of people' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× And if I need something or if I require something from a friend, then I, I contact with them about the chat.

✓ And if I need something from a friend, then I contact them to chat.

'Contact with them' is incorrect; the correct form is 'contact them'. Also, 'about the chat' is awkward; 'to chat' is clearer.

× I prefer by social media because, uh, it feels it gives me more umm, energy to chat with them.

✓ I prefer social media because it gives me more energy to chat with them.

The phrase 'prefer by social media' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer social media' without 'by'.

× So it's, it's uh, very tough to get with, uh, get along with people, uh, face to face.

✓ So it's very tough to get along with people face to face.

The phrase 'to get with, get along with' is redundant; 'get along with' alone is correct.

× So if I need something I, I love to do chat with or I'll have to do contact with people, uh, over the phone.

✓ So if I need something, I like to chat or contact people over the phone.

'Love to do chat with' and 'do contact with' are incorrect; the correct forms are 'like to chat' and 'contact people'.

× Yeah, I have a lot of friends and I, umm, most of the time, uh, not most, most, most of the time.

✓ Yeah, I have a lot of friends, and most of the time...

The repetition 'most, most, most of the time' is redundant and should be simplified to 'most of the time'.

× But whenever I feel disagree or I disagree with something, I, I do argue with my friends and my friend.

✓ But whenever I disagree with something, I argue with my friends.

'Feel disagree' is incorrect; 'disagree' is a verb and does not need 'feel'. Also, 'my friends and my friend' is redundant; 'my friends' suffices.

× My friends also do that. And after doing the argu, we umm, uh, get into a common thing and take a decision.

✓ My friends also do that. After arguing, we come to an agreement and make a decision.

'After doing the argu' is incorrect; 'after arguing' is correct. 'Get into a common thing' is unclear; 'come to an agreement' is clearer. 'Take a decision' should be 'make a decision'.