Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I often use my mobile phone to share my feelings or interesting things I see during the day.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意词汇搭配的准确性。

Ejemplo: I usually talk about my feelings and plans with my friends. For example, we often discuss our schedules to arrange meals together. Sometimes, I also share my negative emotions and seek comfort from them.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的时态，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. Most of the time, I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deep conversations and sharing secrets. However, chatting with a group can broaden my horizons since I can hear different opinions from people of various cultures.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并补充具体理由。

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because you can get immediate responses and observe the other person's facial expressions to see if they are interested.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，避免重复，并具体说明争论的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different personalities. For example, my friends are introverted, so we may have different views on certain topics.

× Like I I've always chat with them on the Internet, like if I got my mobile phone, I can tap anything to share with them, like my feelings or what just happened or I made some splendid view on the road.

✓ Like I've always been chatting with them on the Internet, like if I have my mobile phone, I can tap anything to share with them, like my feelings or what just happened or I saw some splendid view on the road.

这里动词时态和形式使用错误。'I've always chat' 应改为现在完成进行时 'I've always been chatting'，表示动作从过去持续到现在。'if I got' 应改为现在时 'if I have'，因为是假设现在的情况。'I made some splendid view' 应改为 'I saw some splendid view'，因为看到风景用 see 而不是 make。

× I usually check everything with my friends, like I share my feelings, share my schedule to my friends that we can plan out together to eat out or something.

✓ I usually check everything with my friends, like I share my feelings, share my schedule with my friends so that we can plan to eat out or something together.

动词 'share' 后应接介词 'with' 表示分享给某人，不能用 'to'。另外，'plan out together to eat out' 结构不自然，改为 'plan to eat out together' 更符合英语表达习惯。

× That's depends on different situation.

✓ That depends on different situations.

主语 'That' 是单数，谓语动词用单数 'depends' 正确，但 'different situation' 应为复数 'different situations'，因为表示多种不同的情况。

× Most of time I like to chat with one friends that's helpful for deep talk, like you can share everything, even your secrets to them.

✓ Most of the time I like to chat with one friend; that's helpful for deep talk, like you can share everything, even your secrets with them.

'one friends' 中 'one' 是单数，'friends' 是复数，二者不匹配，应改为 'one friend'。另外，'share secrets to them' 应改为 'share secrets with them'。

× But sometimes you talk to a group of people can spend your horizon like you can got a lot of different opinion from different people from different cultures.

✓ But sometimes talking to a group of people can broaden your horizon because you can get a lot of different opinions from different people from different cultures.

'talk to a group of people can spend your horizon' 结构不正确，应改为 'talking to a group of people can broaden your horizon'。'got' 应改为 'get'，'opinion' 应为复数 'opinions'。

× That's the situation. You can got the immediate response from each other like you can pay attention on it if they focus on your communication or not and you can see from their face like they are interested on you or not if you.

✓ That's the situation. You can get the immediate response from each other, like you can pay attention to it to see if they focus on your communication or not, and you can see from their face if they are interested in you or not.

'got' 应为 'get'。'pay attention on' 应为 'pay attention to'。'interested on' 应为 'interested in'。句子结构也做了调整使其更通顺。

× Yeah, sometimes we always have different opinion, like maybe because we have different personality.

✓ Yeah, sometimes we always have different opinions, maybe because we have different personalities.

'different opinion' 应为复数 'different opinions'，'different personality' 应为复数 'different personalities'，因为主语是复数 'we'。

× My friends are absolutely in introverted person, so sometimes we argue of like we have different view of 1 things.

✓ My friends are absolutely introverted people, so sometimes we argue because we have different views on things.

'are absolutely in introverted person' 结构错误，应改为 'are absolutely introverted people'。'argue of like' 不正确，应改为 'argue because'。'different view of 1 things' 应为 'different views on things'。