Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say 'I love chatting with my friends because it helps me communicate better and discuss important matters.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me communicate better and discuss important matters.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear and coherent sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid incomplete or confusing phrases. For instance, say 'I usually chat with my friends about assignments and topics I find difficult, such as understanding sizes in math, and they help me.'

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about assignments and topics I find difficult, such as understanding sizes in math, and they help me.

Sugerencia: Use complete sentences and clear linking words to express preferences and reasons. Avoid incomplete thoughts. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with a group because they offer diverse opinions, which helps me explore different ideas about my career and studies.'

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because they offer diverse opinions, which helps me explore different ideas about my career and studies.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words effectively to compare options. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it builds confidence and strengthens relationships more than social media.'

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it builds confidence and strengthens relationships more than social media.

Sugerencia: Clarify ideas and use correct expressions. Avoid awkward phrases. For example, say 'Sometimes I argue with my friends, but only when they don't listen to my ideas or understand my situation.'

Ejemplo: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but only when they don't listen to my ideas or understand my situation.

× Yes, I love to chatting with my friends, but it's very easy to tell to communicate with them.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends, but it's very easy to communicate with them.

The verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form 'chatting', not the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'tell to communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'easy to communicate'. The infinitive 'to communicate' is correct here after 'easy'.

× Moreover, it's really very helpful for me to chatting and discussing about my. Cautions.

✓ Moreover, it's really very helpful for me to chat and discuss my cautions.

After 'helpful for me to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the gerund. Also, 'discussing about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. The word 'Cautions' should not be capitalized and should be connected properly in the sentence.

× As I'm a student so usually I am chatting with my friends about my assignments and about the topics that I don't understand in class.

✓ As I'm a student, I usually chat with my friends about my assignments and the topics that I don't understand in class.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'As I'm a student'. Also, 'usually I am chatting' is better expressed as 'I usually chat' for habitual actions. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy and correcting tense.

× For an example, I'll it's.

✓ For example,

'For an example' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For example'. The phrase 'I'll it's' is unclear and should be omitted or corrected depending on intended meaning.

× It's very difficult for me to understand about the size, so I got help from my friends about that.

✓ It's very difficult for me to understand the size, so I got help from my friends with that.

'Understand' is a verb that does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'help from my friends about that' should be 'help from my friends with that' to correctly express assistance regarding a topic.

× I think I prefer to chat with group of people because if I wanna get an idea about my career, my studies, so the group of people have different opinions so they will give me a lot of answers.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with a group of people because if I want to get ideas about my career and my studies, the group of people has different opinions, so they will give me a lot of answers.

The phrase 'group of people' requires the article 'a'. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Group of people have' should be 'group of people has' because 'group' is singular. Also, 'an idea' changed to 'ideas' to match plural context.

× So I will get the preferable one or the that help me to get more explore about the.

✓ So I will get the preferable one or the one that helps me to explore more about it.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'The that help' should be 'the one that helps'. 'Get more explore' is incorrect; it should be 'explore more'. The sentence needs a clear object at the end, here 'it' refers to the topic.

× I think face to face communication is better than the social media because it makes people confident and moreover it is better for the relationship to communicate face to face instead of social media.

✓ I think face-to-face communication is better than social media because it makes people confident, and moreover, it is better for relationships to communicate face-to-face instead of through social media.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'The social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Better for the relationship' should be 'better for relationships' in general. 'Instead of social media' is better expressed as 'instead of through social media'.

× Moreover, people get more people explore more and talk more about something else while offline.

✓ Moreover, people explore more and talk more about other things while offline.

The phrase 'people get more people explore more' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'people explore more'. 'Something else' is vague; 'other things' is clearer. 'While offline' is correct.

× Usually I'm not very unfriendly person, so I just argue when they don't hear my ideas, they don't see what situation I'm going on.

✓ Usually, I'm not a very unfriendly person, so I only argue when they don't listen to my ideas or don't understand the situation I'm going through.

'Don't hear my ideas' is better expressed as 'don't listen to my ideas' to indicate active attention. 'Don't see what situation I'm going on' is incorrect; 'don't understand the situation I'm going through' is clearer. 'Just argue' changed to 'only argue' for clarity.