Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
It's absolutely, I'm really enjoy telling my friends after a lot of studying, it helps me feel more relaxed and refreshed which gives me more energy to a new activities. For example when chat with them a few more relaxed and uh lift my mood, reduce stress.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Good, I often chat about women friends about the specific themes like the upcoming event or the occasion special occasions. For example, we always chat about the birthday of my friend and all the the next time of traveling. This time help me more unique and connected.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
To be honest, I'm prefer to chat with only chat with only with my friend. That's because I can share, I can confident to sharing about owner, the order of the story surround me and for example about the Obama study result. I can't.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
To be honest, I'm prefer communicating on social media. That's because it can help me more comfortable and more relaxed. If it possible, I can communicate face to face to learn more about the person better in understand their emotion more clearly.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
I'm hardly arguing my friend because we usually respect each other opinions. However, sometimes during the team project we have a different idea, so it lead to a small argument. But I think this argument help us learn more about the better solution in the.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends after studying because it helps me relax and refresh. For example, talking with them lifts my mood and reduces stress, which gives me more energy for new activities.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I usually chat with my female friends about specific topics like upcoming events or special occasions. For example, we often talk about birthdays and our future travel plans, which helps us feel more connected.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ lý do. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.
Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more confident sharing personal stories. For example, I can talk about my study results more openly with a close friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể.
Ejemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed. However, if possible, I like face-to-face communication to better understand the person's emotions.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ và số nhiều. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.
Ejemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually respect each other's opinions. However, during team projects, we sometimes have different ideas, which can lead to small arguments. I believe these arguments help us find better solutions.
× It's absolutely, I'm really enjoy telling my friends after a lot of studying, it helps me feel more relaxed and refreshed which gives me more energy to a new activities.
✓ It's absolutely true, I really enjoy telling my friends about my studies; it helps me feel more relaxed and refreshed, which gives me more energy for new activities.
The phrase 'It's absolutely' is incomplete; it should be 'It's absolutely true' or similar. 'I'm really enjoy' is incorrect because 'enjoy' should be in base form after 'I'; correct is 'I really enjoy'. Also, 'to a new activities' is incorrect; it should be 'for new activities' because 'energy for' is the correct collocation and 'activities' is plural without 'a'. Suggestions: use complete expressions, correct verb forms, and proper prepositions.
× For example when chat with them a few more relaxed and uh lift my mood, reduce stress.
✓ For example, when I chat with them, I feel a bit more relaxed and it lifts my mood and reduces stress.
The sentence lacks subject 'I' before 'chat'. Also, 'a few more relaxed' is incorrect; it should be 'a bit more relaxed'. The verbs 'lift' and 'reduce' need to agree with the subject and be in correct form: 'it lifts' and 'reduces'. Suggestions: include subjects, use correct quantifiers, and ensure verb agreement.
× Good, I often chat about women friends about the specific themes like the upcoming event or the occasion special occasions.
✓ Good, I often chat with my women friends about specific themes like upcoming events or special occasions.
The phrase 'chat about women friends' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with my women friends'. Also, 'the upcoming event or the occasion special occasions' is redundant and awkward; better to say 'upcoming events or special occasions'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions with 'chat', avoid redundancy, and use possessive pronouns.
× For example, we always chat about the birthday of my friend and all the the next time of traveling.
✓ For example, we always chat about my friend's birthday and our upcoming travel plans.
'The birthday of my friend' is better expressed as 'my friend's birthday'. 'All the the next time of traveling' is unclear and incorrect; 'our upcoming travel plans' is clearer. Also, repeated 'the' is an error. Suggestions: use possessive forms and clear expressions.
× This time help me more unique and connected.
✓ This time helps me feel more unique and connected.
'This time help' lacks subject-verb agreement; it should be 'helps'. Also, 'more unique' is incorrect because 'unique' is an absolute adjective; better to say 'feel unique'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and use adjectives correctly.
× To be honest, I'm prefer to chat with only chat with only with my friend.
✓ To be honest, I prefer to chat only with my friend.
'I'm prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a verb and does not need 'am'. Also, 'chat with only chat with only with' is repetitive and incorrect. Suggestions: use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.
× That's because I can share, I can confident to sharing about owner, the order of the story surround me and for example about the Obama study result.
✓ That's because I can share and I am confident sharing about myself, the order of the stories around me, and, for example, about the Obama study results.
'I can confident to sharing' is incorrect; correct is 'I am confident sharing'. 'Owner' is unclear; likely 'myself' is intended. 'Surround me' should be 'around me'. 'Obama study result' should be plural 'results'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms, pronouns, and prepositions.
× I can't.
✓ I can't.
This sentence is incomplete and unclear in context but grammatically correct as is. No correction needed.
× To be honest, I'm prefer communicating on social media.
✓ To be honest, I prefer communicating on social media.
'I'm prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a verb and does not require 'am'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms.
× That's because it can help me more comfortable and more relaxed.
✓ That's because it can help me feel more comfortable and more relaxed.
'Help me more comfortable' is incorrect; 'help me feel more comfortable' is correct. Suggestions: use correct verb patterns after 'help'.
× If it possible, I can communicate face to face to learn more about the person better in understand their emotion more clearly.
✓ If possible, I can communicate face to face to learn more about the person and better understand their emotions more clearly.
'If it possible' should be 'If possible'. 'Better in understand' is incorrect; correct is 'better understand'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. Suggestions: use correct conditional phrases and verb forms.
× I'm hardly arguing my friend because we usually respect each other opinions.
✓ I hardly argue with my friend because we usually respect each other's opinions.
'I'm hardly arguing' is incorrect; correct is 'I hardly argue'. 'Arguing my friend' needs preposition 'with'. 'Each other opinions' should be 'each other's opinions'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms, prepositions, and possessive pronouns.
× However, sometimes during the team project we have a different idea, so it lead to a small argument.
✓ However, sometimes during team projects we have different ideas, so it leads to small arguments.
'A different idea' should be plural 'different ideas' to match 'we'. 'It lead' should be 'it leads' for subject-verb agreement. 'A small argument' can be plural 'small arguments' for generalization. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pluralization.
× But I think this argument help us learn more about the better solution in the.
✓ But I think this argument helps us learn more about better solutions.
'This argument help' should be 'helps' for subject-verb agreement. 'The better solution in the' is incomplete and incorrect; better to say 'better solutions'. Suggestions: complete sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement.