Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes, but only two close friends because umm, sometimes I want to talk something more detailed or personal and and so I only chat with the people out there I can trust in.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I usually check about like my futures or. My personal life.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think I'm an introverted person so so chat with a group of people is kind of challenge to me. And sometimes it will make me feel uncomfortable.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I prefer to communicate face to face because in my opinions, chat via social media sometimes can be like you can, uh, observe the ambience at the moment and sometimes.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
No, usually I don't because I feel like everybody holds a different opinion towards uh, towards the same topic and it's quite normal. So, so we don't have to argue with our different stance.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,存在重复和语气词,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like chatting with two close friends because I prefer to share personal and detailed topics only with people I trust.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节,避免语法错误。
Ejemplo: I usually chat about my future plans and personal life, such as my career goals and daily experiences.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答较为完整,但存在语法错误和重复,建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am introverted, so talking in a group can be challenging and sometimes uncomfortable for me.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议明确表达观点并补充具体原因,避免语气词和断句不连贯。
Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe the atmosphere and understand emotions better than chatting on social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答内容合理,但存在语气词和重复,建议简化表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: No, I usually don't argue with friends because I believe it's normal for people to have different opinions, so there's no need to argue over them.
× I want to talk something more detailed or personal
✓ I want to talk about something more detailed or personal
这里缺少介词“about”,导致表达不完整。动词“talk”后通常需要介词“about”来引出谈论的内容。建议在“talk”和“something”之间加上“about”。
× I only chat with the people out there I can trust in.
✓ I only chat with the people out there I can trust.
动词“trust”后不需要介词“in”,加上“in”是错误的用法。正确表达是“trust someone”,不加介词。
× I usually check about like my futures or. My personal life.
✓ I usually talk about my future or my personal life.
“check about”用法错误,应该用“talk about”来表达“谈论”。另外,“futures”应为单数“future”,表示未来。
× I usually check about like my futures or. My personal life.
✓ I usually talk about my future or my personal life.
“futures”应为单数“future”,因为这里指的是“我的未来”,是不可数或单数概念。
× chat with a group of people is kind of challenge to me.
✓ chatting with a group of people is kind of a challenge to me.
“challenge”前需要冠词“a”,且“chat”应改为动名词“chatting”作主语。
× so so chat with a group of people is kind of challenge to me.
✓ so chatting with a group of people is kind of a challenge to me.
动词作主语时应使用动名词形式,即“chatting”。
× in my opinions, chat via social media sometimes can be like you can, uh, observe the ambience at the moment and sometimes.
✓ In my opinion, chatting via social media sometimes can be like you cannot observe the ambience at the moment.
“opinions”应为单数“opinion”,表示个人观点。动词“chat”应改为动名词“chatting”。“can be like you can observe”表达不清,应改为“cannot observe”表示无法观察现场氛围。
× So, so we don't have to argue with our different stance.
✓ So, we don't have to argue over our different stances.
“argue with”后面通常接人,“argue over”或“argue about”后面接观点或立场。这里应使用“argue over our different stances”。同时“stance”应为复数“stances”,因为有不同的立场。