Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes, I love chatting with my friends, specifically work call colleagues. Chatting with my friends really makes me relax.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Hmm I often talk with my friend about work stress because we are suffering from stresses feeling in daily walk.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
I prefer I prefer to chat with. Only one friend because chatting with group of people sometimes annies me to cutting or jumping to the conversations.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Basically, I prefer to communicate face to face basis, but in contrast, uh, using social media helps us communicate more frequently. I think this is the biggest benefit of the social media.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
It depends on the topics. For example, uh about the situation of our work. We sometimes argue about how to deal with some kind of issues.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、"specifically work call colleagues"の表現が少し不明瞭で、より明確にすると良いでしょう。また、内容がやや単純なので、もう少し具体的な理由や感情を加えると効果的です。
Ejemplo: Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially my colleagues from work calls. Talking with them helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。"stresses feeling in daily walk"は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より正確な表現を使い、具体的な内容を加えると良いでしょう。
Ejemplo: I often talk with my friends about work-related stress because we face many challenges in our daily jobs, which can be quite exhausting.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 繰り返しや文法の誤り("annies"は"annoys"の誤り)があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。より正確な語彙を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group conversations can be annoying when people interrupt or change topics suddenly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: "face to face basis"は不自然な表現です。また、"in contrast"の使い方が適切でないため、接続詞の使い方を改善しましょう。内容は明確で良いです。
Ejemplo: Basically, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, social media allows us to stay in touch more frequently, which is a big advantage.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答が断片的で、文が短すぎて繋がりが弱いです。より流暢に話すために、文をつなげて具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。
Ejemplo: It depends on the topic. For example, my friends and I sometimes argue about work-related issues, especially when we have different opinions on how to solve problems.
× Hmm I often talk with my friend about work stress because we are suffering from stresses feeling in daily walk.
✓ Hmm I often talk with my friends about work stress because we are suffering from stress feelings in daily work.
The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. 'Stresses feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'stress feelings' to correctly express the plural noun form. 'Daily walk' is likely a typo or incorrect phrase; 'daily work' fits better in this context.
× Hmm I often talk with my friend about work stress because we are suffering from stresses feeling in daily walk.
✓ Hmm I often talk with my friends about work stress because we are suffering from stress feelings in daily work.
The preposition 'in' before 'daily walk' is incorrect; it should be 'during' or better replaced with 'in daily work' to express the intended meaning.
× I prefer I prefer to chat with. Only one friend because chatting with group of people sometimes annies me to cutting or jumping to the conversations.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting with a group of people sometimes annoys me due to cutting or jumping into the conversations.
The sentence has repetition 'I prefer I prefer' and incorrect sentence breaks. 'Annies' is a misspelling of 'annoys'. The phrase 'to cutting or jumping to the conversations' is incorrect; it should be 'due to cutting or jumping into the conversations' to express the cause properly.
× I prefer I prefer to chat with. Only one friend because chatting with group of people sometimes annies me to cutting or jumping to the conversations.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting with a group of people sometimes annoys me due to cutting or jumping into the conversations.
The phrase 'chatting with group of people' lacks the article 'a' before 'group'. It should be 'a group of people' to be grammatically correct.
× Basically, I prefer to communicate face to face basis, but in contrast, uh, using social media helps us communicate more frequently.
✓ Basically, I prefer to communicate on a face-to-face basis, but in contrast, uh, using social media helps us communicate more frequently.
The phrase 'face to face basis' requires the preposition 'on' and hyphens to form the compound adjective 'face-to-face basis'.