Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
I'll double bully. Yes when I was straight up. I always like to chatting with my friend. We can discuss the the life, how difficult it is.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I usually chat about relationship with friends. He also can give me experience, skill and when I was missing in the relationship it will hold me back to the life.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
I always prefer to chat with only one friend because I have too many of secret. I don't want to let so many people know my secret, so I only will chat with my one friend.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face. I don't like via social media because I don't know the emotion about the typing words and face to face I can look love my friends face and I know emotions.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Yeah, sun tie are urged with my friend because we have a different thinking, so we should more lovely and more pension each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议多练习简单句的正确使用,并避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢和聊天的内容。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we can share our experiences and talk about life challenges.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰,语法和词汇使用不准确。建议用更具体的细节说明聊天内容,并用连词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: I usually chat about relationships with my friends because they can share their experiences and advice, which helps me handle my own problems better.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 表达较为清楚,但语法和词汇有待改进。建议注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用,同时可以用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I have many secrets and I don't want to share them with a large group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型,表达清楚原因并保持句子简洁。
Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' facial expressions and understand their emotions better than through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多,表达不清晰。建议学习常用表达和句型,清楚说明原因和解决方法。
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we try to be more understanding and patient with each other.
× I always like to chatting with my friend.
✓ I always like chatting with my friend.
动词like后面接动名词形式,不能用不定式to chatting,应改为like chatting。
× We can discuss the the life, how difficult it is.
✓ We can discuss life, how difficult it is.
life前不需要定冠词the,且the重复出现,应删除。
× I usually chat about relationship with friends.
✓ I usually chat about relationships with friends.
relationship应为复数形式relationships,且前面不需要介词about后面加复数名词。
× He also can give me experience, skill and when I was missing in the relationship it will hold me back to the life.
✓ He can also give me experience and skills, and when I was missing in the relationship, it would hold me back in life.
skill应为复数skills,且表达更自然;hold me back后面搭配in life而非to the life。
× I have too many of secret.
✓ I have too many secrets.
secret应为复数secrets,且many后面直接接复数名词,不用of。
× I only will chat with my one friend.
✓ I will only chat with my one friend.
副词only的位置应靠近动词will chat,不能放在I和will之间。
× I don't like via social media because I don't know the emotion about the typing words and face to face I can look love my friends face and I know emotions.
✓ I don't like communicating via social media because I can't know the emotions behind the typed words, and face to face I can see my friend's face and understand emotions.
动词communicate后面需要用动名词communicating;look love my friends face表达不正确,应改为see my friend's face;friends应为friend's所有格。
× Yeah, sun tie are urged with my friend because we have a different thinking, so we should more lovely and more pension each other.
✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with my friend because we have different thoughts, so we should be more loving and more patient with each other.
sun tie应为sometimes;are urged应为argue;a different thinking应为different thoughts;lovely应为loving;pension应为patient;动词后需加be动词;with each other搭配正确。