Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免使用填充词如“Uh”，并且注意语法，如“a very popular app”。可以更自然地表达，增加连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually use WeChat, a very popular app in China, to discuss our school courses and share interesting stories from our daily lives.

Sugerencia: 回答开头不宜用“And”，应直接回答问题。内容具体且连贯，但可以用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ejemplo: I am an undergraduate student, so my friends and I usually chat about our courses and homework. Besides that, we often discuss interesting events or places to visit in the city. Sometimes, we also share our experiences and challenges.

Sugerencia: 回答中有过多填充词“uh”，影响流畅度。应简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am not very outgoing. When I talk with a group, I find it difficult to join the conversation and find common topics.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且连贯，但有语法错误，如“relationships feels”和“conversations allows”。注意主谓一致。

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because my friends and I live in different places. When we meet in person, our relationship feels much closer, and face-to-face conversations allow us to express emotions more clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答中有填充词“Uh”，且“repeat each other's views”表达不准确，应使用更合适的词汇。建议用更准确的表达和连词。

Ejemplo: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we care about each other and want to express our opinions. However, we usually listen to each other and try to resolve disagreements calmly, so our arguments don't last long or cause harm.

× I usually communicate with my friends on WeChat, which is very popular app in China.

✓ I usually communicate with my friends on WeChat, which is a very popular app in China.

在英语中，单数可数名词前需要使用冠词。这里的“app”是单数可数名词，缺少冠词“a”，应改为“a very popular app”。

× Sometimes we share our experience and challenges.

✓ Sometimes we share our experiences and challenges.

“experience”在这里表示多次经历，应使用复数形式“experiences”。

× And I think I prefer, uh, to chat with, uh, my friend, uh, because I'm not very open and, uh, when I, I chat with a group of people, I don't know how to talk with them and find the topic we talk about.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with my friend because I'm not very open, and when I chat with a group of people, I don't know how to talk with them or find topics to talk about.

原句中“and”开头不合适，且句子结构混乱，重复使用“uh”和“,”影响流畅性。应去掉多余词汇，调整连词使用，使句子更通顺。

× Face to face conversations allows us to express emotions more clearly.

✓ Face to face conversations allow us to express emotions more clearly.

主语“conversations”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“allow”，而非单数“allows”。

× However, we usually repeat each other's views and try to resolve disagreements calmly so our arguments don't last long or damage.

✓ However, we usually respect each other's views and try to resolve disagreements calmly so our arguments don't last long or cause damage.

原句中“repeat each other's views”表达不当，应为“respect each other's views”；“or damage”缺少宾语，应补充为“or cause damage”，使句子完整。