Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 중복 표현을 피하며, 구체적인 이유를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 해야 합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and have fun. Also, we share information and learn new things from each other.

Sugerencia: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 내용이 명확하지 않으며, 중복된 표현이 많습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 주제와 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about current events like politics, world economy, and news from our country and abroad. These topics are interesting and spark good conversations.

Sugerencia: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 명확한 이유를 제시하고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and can talk more openly with someone I know well.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확하며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 완전한 문장으로 자신의 선호 이유를 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more personal and easier to understand emotions than chatting on social media.

Sugerencia: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 명확하고 완전한 문장으로 자신의 경험을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we usually share similar opinions on many issues, which helps us avoid conflicts.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because from when I was chatting I can relax and unwind my mind so and it's so funny itself and I can change my information and my friends inform.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I chat, I can relax and unwind my mind. It's so fun itself, and I can exchange information with my friends.

The original sentence misuses 'chatting' and has awkward phrasing. 'From when I was chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'when I chat' to express habitual action. 'It's so funny itself' should be 'It's so fun itself' or better 'It's so fun'. 'I can change my information and my friends inform' is unclear; the correct phrase is 'I can exchange information with my friends.' This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Are we usually chat about the worldwide youth, for example, uh, the news about Trump or world economics and the accidents in our country or foreign country? Uh, it's very funny and interesting, uh, with my friends.

✓ We usually chat about worldwide youth topics, for example, the news about Trump, world economics, and accidents in our country or foreign countries. It's very fun and interesting with my friends.

The phrase 'Are we usually chat' is incorrect; it should be 'We usually chat' to form a correct statement. 'Worldwide youth' is vague; 'worldwide youth topics' clarifies the meaning. 'Funny' is replaced with 'fun' to correctly describe enjoyable topics. 'Foreign country' should be plural 'foreign countries' to match the context.

× I preferred chatting with only one friend because, uh, to be honest, I'm in trouble to the person. So uh, to me it's more convenient with one people who I'm familiar with.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because, to be honest, I have trouble with groups of people. So, to me, it's more convenient with one person whom I'm familiar with.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context suggests a present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'I'm in trouble to the person' is incorrect; it should be 'I have trouble with groups of people' to express difficulty. 'One people' is incorrect; 'one person' is singular and correct. 'Who I'm familiar with' is better as 'whom I'm familiar with' for grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because, uh, in SNS it's. It's not familiar to me to communicate by chatting, so I'm and.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because communicating through social media is not familiar to me, so I don't do it much.

'In SNS' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'through social media' or 'on social media.' The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'so I'm and' is not meaningful. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition usage.

× No, I haven't had any argument with my friends because my friends and I always have the same perspective, uh, for so many problems. This makes uh, my friends and I.

✓ No, I haven't had any arguments with my friends because my friends and I always have the same perspective on many problems. This makes my relationship with my friends very good.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match 'any.' 'For so many problems' should be 'on many problems' to use the correct preposition. The last sentence is incomplete; it is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.