Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and clear by using correct grammar and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated on their lives and also relieves my stress. Moreover, talking to them improves my mental health and makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples, using appropriate verb forms and linking words.

Ejemplo: We usually chat about various topics, such as mutual friends, our family lives, and current news. This variety keeps our conversations interesting and engaging.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct verb forms to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I find it more enjoyable. However, when I talk to just one friend, I often feel nervous and afraid of making mistakes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking phrases to explain your preference logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because face-to-face conversations reveal my nervousness through facial expressions, which I find uncomfortable and impolite.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your response more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe arguing doesn't solve problems and is therefore pointless.

× We usually we usually gossiping about everything like people around us are common friends, our family life and even the news like everything around us.

✓ We usually gossip about everything like people around us, common friends, our family life and even the news, like everything around us.

The verb 'gossiping' is incorrectly used here. After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'gossip' is correct instead of 'gossiping'. Also, the sentence had a repeated phrase 'we usually' which was removed for clarity.

× I will feel like afraid to make mistake while chatting.

✓ I will feel afraid to make mistakes while chatting.

The phrase 'make mistake' is incorrect because 'mistake' should be pluralized to 'mistakes' when used in this context. Also, 'feel like afraid' is incorrect; it should be 'feel afraid' without 'like'.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because when you communicate, communicate face to face at the person who communicate with you can see every expression expression of you and they would easily tell if you're nervous or uncomfortable about them.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because when you communicate face to face, the person who communicates with you can see every expression of yours and they can easily tell if you're nervous or uncomfortable around them.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used; it should be omitted or replaced with 'with' or 'around' depending on context. Also, 'expression expression' is a repetition error. 'Expression of you' should be 'expression of yours' to correctly use the possessive form.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because when you communicate, communicate face to face at the person who communicate with you can see every expression expression of you and they would easily tell if you're nervous or uncomfortable about them.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because when you communicate face to face, the person who communicates with you can see every expression of yours and they can easily tell if you're nervous or uncomfortable around them.

The pronoun 'you' is used inconsistently; it should be consistent and appropriate. Also, 'about them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'around them' when referring to feeling nervous or uncomfortable in someone's presence.

× Yes I like to chat with my friends cause and not only can help us get to know our current situation also help me to release my stress, I have someone to talk with.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends because it not only helps us get to know our current situation but also helps me to relieve my stress; I have someone to talk with.

The conjunction 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. The sentence structure is incorrect; 'not only... but also' should be used properly to connect two related ideas. Also, 'release my stress' is better expressed as 'relieve my stress'.

× It also help my mental health and makes me happy.

✓ It also helps my mental health and makes me happy.

The verb 'help' does not agree with the singular subject 'It'. It should be 'helps' to match the singular subject.

× From my opinion, arguing doesn't like solve the problems so it's useless for me.

✓ In my opinion, arguing doesn't solve problems, so it's useless for me.

The phrase 'From my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In my opinion'. Also, 'arguing doesn't like solve the problems' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.