Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「in different place」は「in different places」や「when we are apart」に修正し、"chatting or chatting SNS"は「chatting via social media」などに簡潔にまとめると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends on my phone because when we are apart, we can easily communicate through social media apps.

Sugerencia: 内容が少し不明瞭で文法的な誤りもあります。「go at somewhere to eat」は「going somewhere to eat」や「making plans to eat out」に直し、理由も具体的に説明すると良いです。

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about where to go for meals because eating out together is a great way to enjoy our time and have good conversations.

Sugerencia: 回答が不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。「TV in a group of people」は意味不明なので削除し、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more lively and I can share jokes and enjoy different opinions.

Sugerencia: 文法と表現に改善の余地があります。「target via social media sometimes couldn't make sense」は「messages via social media can sometimes be misunderstood」に直し、ジェスチャーの重要性を明確に述べると良いです。

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because messages on social media can sometimes be misunderstood, and in person, we can use gestures and facial expressions to express ourselves better.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「I to argue with my friends sometimes makes our friendship bad」は「Arguing with friends can harm our friendship」に修正し、経験についても簡潔に説明すると良いです。

Ejemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe that arguments can damage our friendship. I once had an argument that almost ended a friendship, so I try to avoid conflicts.

× I like talking on my phone with my friends.

✓ I like talking to my friends on my phone.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'talking' here. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating the person you are talking with. Also, 'on my phone' should come after 'talking to my friends' for clarity.

× when we are in different place, uh we can talk through chatting or chatting SNS.

✓ when we are in different places, we can talk through chatting or chatting on SNS.

The noun 'place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to different locations. Also, 'chatting SNS' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting on SNS' to indicate the platform used.

× I always talk with my friends to go at somewhere to eat.

✓ I always talk with my friends about going somewhere to eat.

The phrase 'talk with my friends to go at somewhere' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' when discussing topics. 'Somewhere' does not need 'at' before it, and 'going' is the correct gerund form after 'about'.

× go out with my friends is a best talking place for me.

✓ Going out with my friends is the best place to talk for me.

The phrase 'a best' is incorrect; 'best' is a superlative adjective and should be preceded by 'the'. Also, 'talking place' is awkward; 'place to talk' is more natural.

× TV in a group of people, uh, I can find some words to, to be fun and I can say something fun to a group of people.

✓ When chatting in a group of people, I can find some fun things to say and I can say something fun to the group.

The original sentence is unclear and has structural issues. 'TV in a group of people' is likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverbial phrase modifying 'communicate'.

× target via social media sometimes couldn't make sense

✓ talking via social media sometimes doesn't make sense

The word 'target' is incorrect here; it should be 'talking'. Also, 'couldn't' should be 'doesn't' to match the present tense context.

× Also, uh communicate face to face. Uh has not only their words, but also kind of gesture.

✓ Also, communicating face-to-face includes not only words but also gestures.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× I to argue with my friends sometimes makes our friendship bad.

✓ Arguing with my friends sometimes harms our friendship.

The phrase 'I to argue' is incorrect. The gerund 'Arguing' should be used as the subject. Also, 'makes our friendship bad' is awkward; 'harms our friendship' is more natural.

× I had a experience uh, which is after all break up our friendship.

✓ I had an experience where we eventually broke up our friendship.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'experience'. The phrase 'which is after all break up our friendship' is ungrammatical; it is corrected to a clearer expression.