Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达具体内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am an outgoing person and I enjoy chatting with my friends during breakfast or lunch. We usually talk about their work or new friends they have made.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误，表达混乱。建议明确主题，使用正确词汇，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: My friends and I share common interests. For example, we both like Japanese anime, so I often share new episodes and pictures posted by artists on Twitter.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免口头语，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can have a deeper conversation compared to talking in a group.

Sugerencia: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误，建议注意时态和词汇搭配，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because people show emotions more clearly, which helps me understand them better. When chatting online, it's harder to feel emotions and I might misunderstand.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为具体，但语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和句子结构，表达更准确。

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about whether a celebrity's behavior should be judged. Recently, we discussed whether a pop star should be charged with a crime.

× Yes, I am sharing an outgoing person and I really like chatting with my friends on the breakfast or lunch during the day or some basic information about their works or new friends and.

✓ Yes, I am an outgoing person and I really like chatting with my friends at breakfast or lunch during the day, sharing some basic information about their work or new friends.

这里“sharing”用法错误，应该用“am an outgoing person”来描述身份，而不是进行时态的“sharing”。另外，“on the breakfast or lunch”应改为“at breakfast or lunch”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, I am sharing an outgoing person and I really like chatting with my friends on the breakfast or lunch during the day or some basic information about their works or new friends and.

✓ Yes, I am an outgoing person and I really like chatting with my friends at breakfast or lunch during the day, sharing some basic information about their work or new friends.

介词“on the breakfast or lunch”使用错误，正确用法是“at breakfast or lunch”，表示在吃早餐或午餐时。

× My friends and I have some interesting common for example, we both love enemies from Japan, so I often share with her and new produced enemy and the newly pictures posted by writers and artists from Twitter.

✓ My friends and I have some interesting things in common. For example, we both love anime from Japan, so I often share with her new produced anime and the new pictures posted by writers and artists on Twitter.

“interesting common”应为“interesting things in common”，表达“有共同的兴趣”。“enemies”应为“anime（动画）”，可能是拼写错误。名词复数和单数使用错误。

× My friends and I have some interesting common for example, we both love enemies from Japan, so I often share with her and new produced enemy and the newly pictures posted by writers and artists from Twitter.

✓ My friends and I have some interesting things in common. For example, we both love anime from Japan, so I often share with her new produced anime and the new pictures posted by writers and artists on Twitter.

“posted by writers and artists from Twitter”中的“from”用法不当，正确应为“on Twitter”，表示图片发布的平台。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend, Umm, even if I'm an outgoing person, I don't like to talk among a group of people. Uh, in which I have several relevant person with me and I prefer to chat with a closer one. And.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. Umm, even if I'm an outgoing person, I don't like to talk in a group of people. Uh, when I have several relevant people with me, I prefer to chat with a closer one.

“talk among a group of people”应改为“talk in a group of people”，介词使用错误。“in which”用法不当，应改为“when”。“person”应为复数“people”。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend, Umm, even if I'm an outgoing person, I don't like to talk among a group of people. Uh, in which I have several relevant person with me and I prefer to chat with a closer one. And.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. Umm, even if I'm an outgoing person, I don't like to talk in a group of people. Uh, when I have several relevant people with me, I prefer to chat with a closer one.

“several relevant person”中“person”应为复数“people”，因为“several”修饰复数名词。

× I prefer communicate face to face nowadays. Most people have some motions while they talk, but if you talk via media, I can't feel the emotions of you and I may react with the wrong manner.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face nowadays. Most people have some emotions while they talk, but if you talk via media, I can't feel your emotions and I may react in the wrong manner.

“prefer communicate”缺少不定式“to”，应为“prefer to communicate”。“emotions”拼写错误。介词“with the wrong manner”应为“in the wrong manner”。“the emotions of you”表达不自然，应为“your emotions”。

× Yes, I sometimes have arguments with my friends, especially when we have different views over whether a celebrity's behavior should be judged by others. And recently we also have discussions over Pop Star about whether he's be charged or not.

✓ Yes, I sometimes have arguments with my friends, especially when we have different views about whether a celebrity's behavior should be judged by others. And recently we have also had discussions about a pop star about whether he has been charged or not.

“he's be charged”时态错误，应为“he has been charged”，使用现在完成时。

× Yes, I sometimes have arguments with my friends, especially when we have different views over whether a celebrity's behavior should be judged by others. And recently we also have discussions over Pop Star about whether he's be charged or not.

✓ Yes, I sometimes have arguments with my friends, especially when we have different views about whether a celebrity's behavior should be judged by others. And recently we have also had discussions about a pop star about whether he has been charged or not.

“views over”应改为“views about”，介词使用错误。同样，“discussions over”应为“discussions about”。