Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to make it more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'some little things in our lives', you could say 'everyday matters'. Also, try to use linking words to improve flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends about everyday matters because it helps me catch up on their lives and see if I can support them in any way.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit disorganized and includes filler words like 'umm'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid listing too many points without elaboration.

Ejemplo: Usually, I talk about my recent experiences, such as places I've visited and interesting opinions I've heard from colleagues and my boss. Additionally, I share how I'm feeling, especially when I'm happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your preference clearly, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to explain your reasons more smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer one-on-one conversations because they allow me to explore topics in depth. In contrast, group chats tend to stay on the surface, which I find less satisfying.

Sugerencia: Good answer with clear reasoning and appropriate linking words. To improve, you could add a bit more detail or examples to make your response richer and more natural.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For serious matters, I prefer face-to-face communication to ensure clarity, but for casual topics, I usually use social media to stay connected.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and shows your attitude well. To improve, avoid starting sentences with 'But' and try to combine ideas using linking words for better coherence.

Ejemplo: I sometimes argue with friends when I have solid points; however, I am open-minded and always try to understand their perspectives.

× I just basically tell them where have I been, people that I met, interesting opinions that I received from people around me, from the colleagues, from my boss, and umm, how happy I am today.

✓ I just basically tell them where I have been, people that I met, interesting opinions that I received from people around me, from the colleagues, from my boss, and umm, how happy I am today.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the question word order 'where have I been' in a statement. In English, indirect questions or embedded clauses should use the statement word order 'where I have been'. This is a common error when embedding questions within statements. To improve, use the correct word order for embedded clauses.

× I rather prefer one-on-one session with a friend so that I can dig deep in what I'm interested.

✓ I rather prefer a one-on-one session with a friend so that I can dig deep into what I'm interested in.

The original sentence misses the article 'a' before 'one-on-one session' and uses 'dig deep in' instead of the correct preposition 'dig deep into'. Also, 'interested' requires the preposition 'in' to complete the phrase. The conjunction 'so that' is correct, but the prepositions and article need correction for grammatical accuracy.

× I I don't like talking in a big group because it's just only get on to the surface, but it doesn't go deep and I don't really like it that way.

✓ I don't like talking in a big group because it just only gets on to the surface, but it doesn't go deep and I don't really like it that way.

The sentence has a subject-verb agreement issue where 'it' requires the verb 'gets' (third person singular). Also, the phrase 'just only get on to the surface' is awkward; 'just only gets on to the surface' is better. The repeated 'I' at the start is likely a typo and should be removed. The conjunctions 'because' and 'but' are used correctly.