Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa natural ni suru tame ni, fuyou na hesitation ya kotoba no kurikaeshi o sakete kudasai. Mata, 'rife' ya 'revive story' nado no kotoba wa imi ga wakari nikui node, wakari yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai. 5 bun no bunshou de, shougai o fukumeru you ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually talk about our grades, travel experiences, and funny stories that happened recently.

Sugerencia: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete kudasai. Rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte, setsumei o shousai ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our travel experiences, school life, and family stories. These topics help me feel connected with them.

Sugerencia: Hesitation ya kurikaeshi o herashite, motto seikaku na bunshou o tsukutte kudasai. Rikai shi yasui you ni, riron-teki na setsumei to renraku-go o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation, but I prefer talking with one friend because I can focus more on their story and have a better face-to-face conversation.

Sugerencia: Kotae ga kurikaeshi ya hesitation ga ooi node, motto shizen ni shite kudasai. Setsumei wa rikai shi yasui you ni, renraku-go o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can understand how they feel and what they want to say better than chatting through social media.

Sugerencia: Hesitation ya kurikaeshi o herashite, motto seikaku ni kotaete kudasai. Renraku-go o tsukatte, setsumei o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends because I want to maintain good relationships. Instead, I try to have deep conversations and share my thoughts with them.

× I usually chat with them about the rife umm, grades uh, such as their travel experience, they revive story and funny thing that happens in my round drawers.

✓ I usually chat with them about life, grades, such as their travel experiences, their stories, and funny things that happen around us.

The word 'rife' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'life'. 'Revive story' is incorrect; it should be 'their stories'. 'Funny thing that happens in my round drawers' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'funny things that happen around us'. These corrections improve clarity and correct adjective and noun usage.

× Oh, I usually tried with my friends about, umm, there's someone who we know each other or like, uh, for yeah, for everyone knows about all like uh, the travel experience, the about school life, family stories or something that makes me feel.

✓ Oh, I usually try with my friends about, umm, people we know or like, uh, things everyone knows about, such as travel experiences, school life, family stories, or something that makes me feel.

The verb 'tried' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'try' because the question is about usual habits. Also, sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I get more focus on the story.

✓ I get more focused on the story.

The phrase 'get more focus on' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'get more focused on' to indicate paying more attention.

× They yeah, they shared and then I, I talked to them, yeah, more face to face each other.

✓ They share, and then I talk to them more face to face.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect tense. 'They shared' should be 'they share' to match present tense. 'More face to face each other' is awkward; 'more face to face' is sufficient.

× Oh, I prefer face to face communicate face to face, however, yeah, chatting with social, chatting through social media because I can uh, when we chat face to face, I usually understand how they felt or what they want to Yeah, what they want to talk about.

✓ Oh, I prefer to communicate face to face; however, I also chat through social media because when we chat face to face, I usually understand how they feel or what they want to talk about.

The phrase 'prefer face to face communicate face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate face to face'. Also, 'how they felt' should be 'how they feel' to maintain present tense. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Of course not. I didn't argue with my friends because I don't want to Yeah, I don't want to get bad relationship with my, uh, friends.

✓ Of course not. I don't argue with my friends because I don't want to have a bad relationship with them.

The use of past tense 'didn't argue' is inconsistent with the present tense context. 'Get bad relationship' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a bad relationship'. Pronoun usage is corrected for clarity.