Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'discuss about' nên là 'discuss'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại nội dung.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives, share funny stories from school, and sometimes discuss lessons to help each other understand better.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại. Nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp ý.

Ejemplo: I usually chat about my daily life and funny stories at school. Additionally, we discuss lessons to help each other understand better, which is very convenient for exchanging knowledge.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'I take that' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because they can give me advice and share their experiences. Also, it helps me learn teamwork skills.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'I refer' nên là 'I prefer', 'know O others emotions' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows us to share our feelings genuinely and understand others' emotions through facial expressions and body language, making the conversation more meaningful.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'I agree with my friends' nên là 'I argue with my friends', 'ours feelings' nên là 'our feelings', 'more stronger' là lỗi so sánh kép. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends over small daily problems. However, we understand each other well, so we talk and share our feelings, which makes our friendship stronger.

× I usually talk about my daily life or some funny story at school with them and also we can discuss about lessons at school.

✓ I usually talk about my daily life or some funny stories at school with them and also we can discuss lessons at school.

In English, the verb 'discuss' is not followed by the preposition 'about'. The correct form is 'discuss lessons', not 'discuss about lessons'.

× I usually talk about my daily life or some funny story at school with them and also we can discuss about lessons at school.

✓ I usually talk about my daily life or some funny stories at school with them and also we can discuss lessons at school.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context of multiple instances. Using plural form is more natural when referring to more than one story.

× I usually talk about my daily life or some funny stories at school and also we sometimes discuss lessons to help each other understand better.

✓ I usually talk about my daily life or some funny stories at school and also we sometimes discuss lessons to help each other understand better.

No preposition error in this sentence; no correction needed here.

× Actually, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I take that if I chat with a lot of people, they can give me a lot of advice and a lot of experiences, so I can learn from that and also they can give me opportunities to work as a team.

✓ Actually, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I think that if I chat with a lot of people, they can give me a lot of advice and a lot of experience, so I can learn from that and also they can give me opportunities to work as a team.

The phrase 'I take that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I think that'. Also, 'experiences' should be 'experience' as an uncountable noun in this context.

× Actually I refer communicating face to face because it allows us to share our experiences and emotions genuinely and also we can know O others emotions, fashion, facial impression and modern language.

✓ Actually, I prefer communicating face to face because it allows us to share our experiences and emotions genuinely and also we can know others' emotions, fashion, facial expressions, and modern language.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; it should be 'prefer'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated or kept as is but with commas for clarity. 'O others emotions' is a typo and should be 'others' emotions'. 'Facial impression' should be 'facial expressions'.

× This makes the conservation more.

✓ This makes the conversation better.

The word 'conservation' is a typo; the correct word is 'conversation'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'better' completes the thought.

× Yes, sometimes I agree with my friends because of many small problems in daily lives, but we know each other better so we can talk and share ours feelings with them and make the friendship more stronger and certainly.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because of many small problems in daily life, but we know each other better so we can talk and share our feelings with them and make the friendship stronger and more certain.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'agree' instead of 'argue' given the question. 'Daily lives' should be 'daily life'. 'Ours feelings' should be 'our feelings'. 'More stronger' is incorrect; 'stronger' alone suffices or 'more strong' but 'stronger' is preferred. 'Certainly' is incorrectly used; 'more certain' or 'certain' is better.