Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they often help me generate new ideas. For example, when I discuss work-related issues or household matters, they offer useful suggestions that help reduce my stress.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: I usually chat about work-related topics and household matters. For instance, I often ask my friends for new recipe suggestions or advice on what items to buy for my home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repetition and be more concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a small group of two or three friends because they offer diverse and innovative opinions. This variety helps me make better decisions and explore new ideas.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid minor grammatical errors for better fluency.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I believe it helps form real connections. Moreover, seeing the person's facial expressions and eyes makes me feel more comfortable and engaged.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific examples to clarify your points.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, we always ensure that our arguments do not harm our friendship. For example, if I say something hurtful, I apologise to maintain our good relationship.

× I really like to chat with my friends because uh, they help me with forming new ideas like when I say about my work things or that is related to my house, they'll help me with a few suggestions that helps me to ease my umm, stress.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends because they help me form new ideas, like when I talk about my work or things related to my house, they'll help me with a few suggestions that help me ease my stress.

The phrase 'like when I say about my work things' is incorrect; 'say about' should be 'talk about'. Also, 'help me with forming' is better as 'help me form' because 'help' is followed by the base verb. 'That helps me' should be 'that help me' to agree with plural 'suggestions'. Using 'chatting' instead of 'to chat' fits better here as a gerund after 'like'. These corrections improve verb form usage and subject-verb agreement.

× As I earlier mentioned, I love to chat about my work related, uh, things my and also regarding my household course where I can ask them for new suggestion how to make a new, umm, recipes or I could as a help have to buy.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I love to chat about my work-related things and also about my household chores where I can ask them for new suggestions on how to make new recipes or get help to buy ingredients.

The phrase 'work related, uh, things my' is unclear and should be 'work-related things'. 'Regarding my household course' is incorrect; it should be 'about my household chores'. 'New suggestion' should be plural 'new suggestions'. 'How to make a new, umm, recipes' is incorrect; 'recipes' is plural so 'a new' should be removed. 'I could as a help have to buy' is unclear and corrected to 'get help to buy ingredients'. Prepositions like 'about' and 'on' are used correctly here to indicate topics and methods.

× I always share with a group of people, at least there would be two to three in my call because people of my age can give me different opinions.

✓ I always share with a group of people, at least two to three in my call, because people my age can give me different opinions.

The phrase 'there would be two to three in my call' is awkward; removing 'there would be' makes it clearer. 'People of my age' is better as 'people my age'. The plural 'opinions' is correct. This correction improves sentence clarity and natural plural usage.

× Of course I always wanted to talk to people straight to face to face because that is how I feel real connections are formed.

✓ Of course, I always want to talk to people face to face because that is how I feel real connections are formed.

The phrase 'wanted to talk to people straight to face to face' is incorrect. 'Wanted' should be present tense 'want' to match the context. 'Straight to face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is simply 'face to face'. Prepositions 'to' are not needed here. This correction fixes tense and preposition usage.

× They can also give me very innovative opinions, which can really be helpful for me to do anything further.

✓ They can also give me very innovative opinions, which can really help me do anything further.

The phrase 'can really be helpful for me to do' is wordy and awkward. Changing it to 'can really help me do' is more natural and grammatically correct. This addresses verb form and clarity.

× We would have a different opinions on different topics but at the end we make sure that our argue doesn't affect our friendship in anyways.

✓ We would have different opinions on different topics, but in the end, we make sure that our arguments don't affect our friendship in any way.

'A different opinions' is incorrect; 'opinions' is plural so 'a' should be removed. 'Our argue' is incorrect; the noun form is 'arguments'. 'In anyways' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in any way'. These corrections fix article usage, noun form, and idiomatic expressions.