Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복되는 표현과 불필요한 망설임이 많습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 현재와 과거를 구분하여 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: When I was in my twenties, I enjoyed chatting with my friends a lot because I was young and had more free time. However, now I spend more time talking with my family since I have my own family.

Sugerencia: 답변이 비교적 명확하고 구체적이지만, 'childhood performance'라는 표현이 모호하며, 연결어 사용이 조금 더 자연스러워야 합니다. 전문 용어를 정확히 사용하고, 문장 간 연결을 부드럽게 하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Since my major is childhood performance, most of my friends are musicians. Therefore, we usually talk about music, including new compositions, practice techniques, and upcoming concerts, which I find really inspiring.

Sugerencia: 답변에 문법 오류와 반복, 불필요한 망설임이 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 주어와 동사의 일치를 정확히 하며, 감정을 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't like crowded places. When I'm in a group, I feel very nervous, so one-on-one conversations are more comfortable for me.

Sugerencia: 답변이 의사 전달은 되지만, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 'communicate' 동사의 형태와 전치사 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer to communicate face-to-face because, although many people use social media nowadays, I think face-to-face communication is easier to understand.

Sugerencia: 답변이 비교적 구체적이고 논리적이지만, 중복된 단어와 약간의 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장 내 중복을 피하고, 시제와 관사 사용에 주의하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen very often. For example, when I was in my twenties, I had a disagreement with a close friend due to a misunderstanding, but we talked it through and finally made up. I believe arguing can be healthy if it helps us understand each other better.

× Actually, when I was, uh, 20s, umm, I like enjoying chatting with my friends because, uh, umm, at the time I was young, but be now, uh, I'm, I have a, my own family, so I'm not my chatting friend is my family.

✓ Actually, when I was in my 20s, I liked enjoying chatting with my friends because at the time I was young, but now, I have my own family, so my chatting friends are my family.

The sentence contains incorrect tense usage and missing prepositions. 'When I was 20s' should be 'when I was in my 20s' to indicate age range. 'I like enjoying' should be past tense 'I liked enjoying' to match 'when I was'. 'Be now' is incorrect; it should be 'now'. Also, 'I'm not my chatting friend is my family' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'my chatting friends are my family'. These corrections improve tense consistency and sentence clarity.

× Actually, since my major is childhood performance, all of my friends are are the musicians as well.

✓ Actually, since my major is childhood performance, all of my friends are musicians as well.

The phrase 'are are the musicians' is redundant and incorrect. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because we are talking about friends in general, not a specific group. Also, the repeated 'are' is a typographical error. Correcting to 'are musicians' fixes the pronoun and article usage.

× Yeah, absolutely. I prefer to with only one friend because of actually I don't like any crowded people, crowd crowded, uh, atmosphere and uh, when I was, when I was in Group, I really nervous.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I prefer to be with only one friend because actually I don't like any crowded people or crowded atmosphere, and when I was in a group, I was really nervous.

The phrase 'prefer to with' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be with'. 'Crowd crowded' is a repetition and incorrect; 'crowded' alone suffices. 'When I was in Group' needs an article: 'in a group'. Also, 'I really nervous' lacks the verb 'was'. These corrections fix preposition use, article use, and verb presence.

× So I prefer to with only one people.

✓ So I prefer to be with only one person.

'Prefer to with' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be with'. Also, 'one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; the singular 'person' should be used after 'one'. This corrects preposition and singular/plural usage.

× Uh, definitely I prefer to communicate face to face because these days many people use communicated with social media, but I think umm, communicated with face to face is more more understandable.

✓ Uh, definitely I prefer to communicate face to face because these days many people use social media to communicate, but I think communicating face to face is more understandable.

'Use communicated with social media' is incorrect; it should be 'use social media to communicate'. 'Communicated with face to face' is incorrect; the gerund 'communicating' should be used. These corrections fix preposition and verb form errors.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends but it it doesn't happen very often. For example, when I was 20s I had a disagreement with a close friend about a misunderstanding but we talked it through and finally made-up.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends but it doesn't happen very often. For example, when I was in my 20s I had a disagreement with a close friend about a misunderstanding but we talked it through and finally made up.

'When I was 20s' should be 'when I was in my 20s' to indicate age. 'Made-up' should be 'made up' as a phrasal verb without a hyphen. These corrections fix preposition and verb form errors.