Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using proper linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'makes me to coherent'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I am connected to Wi-Fi. This allows me to stay in touch with them in real time and share funny emojis, which makes our conversations more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: Usually, I chat with my university colleagues about our assignments and presentation slides. Additionally, we discuss scientific information related to our topics and share useful references to help each other.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your reasons clearly using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to share knowledge with different people. Moreover, group chats are attractive as they help me gain positive insights and learn new things.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using better linking words. Also, avoid phrases like 'makes me to be in a real world' and use more natural expressions.

Ejemplo: I mostly prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me connect better with the person. It feels more real and allows for clearer understanding compared to social media.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and complete response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your approach to disagreements.

Ejemplo: I usually avoid arguing with friends. Instead, I try to explain the importance of the issue calmly and clarify any misunderstandings, which helps maintain a good connection and mutual understanding.

× Yes, of course, I like chatting with with my friends when my cellular data was off and which was connected to Wi-Fi.

✓ Yes, of course, I like chatting with my friends when my cellular data is off and I am connected to Wi-Fi.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was' and 'which was connected' which disrupts the present habitual action context. The correction uses present tense 'is' and 'am connected' to match the habitual action of chatting when connected to Wi-Fi.

× So which makes me to coherent with my friends in a real time and make some funny emojis.

✓ So it helps me to stay connected with my friends in real time and make some funny emojis.

The pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used to refer to the previous clause. 'It' is the correct pronoun here. Also, 'coherent' is incorrectly used; 'stay connected' is more appropriate. 'In a real time' should be 'in real time' without 'a'.

× Usually, uh, I used to chat with my university colleague, uh, about my assignments as well as, uh, the presentation PPT and gathering some scientific information, uh, which has given to us on the given topic.

✓ Usually, I chat with my university colleagues about my assignments as well as the presentation PPT and gather some scientific information which has been given to us on the given topic.

'Used to' implies past habit but the question is about usual present activity, so present tense 'chat' is appropriate. 'Colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to match context. 'Gathering' should be 'gather' to maintain parallel verb structure. 'Has given' should be 'has been given' to correctly use passive voice.

× And we used to gather some references from the.

✓ And we used to gather some references from various sources.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'various sources' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I would also prefer a group chart because, uh, it's a good sign of, uh, sharing knowledge, uh, from different people And uh, uh, having such, such type of groups is very, uh, attractive and make you some positive in the knowledge as well as, uh, which makes.

✓ I would also prefer a group chat because it's a good way of sharing knowledge from different people. Having such groups is very attractive and gives you some positivity in knowledge as well.

'Group chart' is incorrect; it should be 'group chat'. 'Make you some positive in the knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'gives you some positivity in knowledge'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I mostly prefer to communicate by the face to face because it makes me to be in a real world and have a very good coherent between us and it feels like the person is real in front of you rather than sharing by social media.

✓ I mostly prefer to communicate face-to-face because it makes me feel like I am in the real world and there is good coherence between us. It feels like the person is really in front of you rather than communicating through social media.

'By the face to face' is incorrect; 'face-to-face' is used without preposition or with 'communicate face-to-face'. 'Makes me to be' should be 'makes me feel like I am'. 'Have a very good coherent' is incorrect; 'there is good coherence' is correct. 'Sharing by social media' should be 'communicating through social media'.

× Mostly I don't prefer to argue with friends rather than I will explain the importance of the any argument and give a clarity to them and make a good connection and understanding between both of us and.

✓ Mostly, I don't prefer to argue with friends; instead, I explain the importance of any argument, give clarity to them, and build a good connection and understanding between us.

'Don't prefer to argue rather than I will explain' is awkward and incorrect. Using 'instead' clarifies the contrast. 'Give a clarity' should be 'give clarity'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.