Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes, absolutely. I like that because my friends are I'd the ideal, the ideal friends, uh, I like their thoughts, their beliefs and everything, so I enjoy Chi I'm enjoying to chat with them to know their news, to know uh.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
We all go in many topics and umm, many issues in our society. Uh, we are talking actually about our thoughts, our beliefs, our religion or sometimes we are expressing our feelings, our, our umm.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
In real life, umm, I prefer to chat with a with a group of people, but umm, through mobile, I prefer to chat with one person because I don't, uh, because chatting with many people distracting me or confusing me, so I prefer to.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I prefer to communicate face to face because this will help me to express my thoughts and idea and feelings clearly. But if there is a distance between us so we cannot do anything, umm I have to chat with them using the social media apps and contact.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Sometimes, yeah, because we are humans and we have different thoughts and different beliefs. So it's normally or it's nature to argue with each other. Because maybe she will talk about animals as a pet.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use simple and natural expressions, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, directly state why you like chatting with friends and add a specific reason.
Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they have interesting thoughts and beliefs. I like to hear their news and share my own experiences with them. It helps me feel connected and supported.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Be specific about the topics you discuss and avoid hesitations. For example, mention some specific issues or feelings you share with friends.
Ejemplo: We usually chat about many topics, such as social issues, our beliefs, and religion. Sometimes, we also share our feelings and personal experiences to support each other.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Try to finish your sentences clearly and use linking words to explain your preferences logically. Avoid hesitations and be concise. For example, explain why you prefer group chats in person but one-on-one chats on mobile.
Ejemplo: In real life, I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more lively. However, when using mobile phones, I prefer chatting with one person because group chats can be distracting and confusing.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Your answer is good but try to avoid hesitations and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain the advantages of face-to-face communication and when social media is necessary.
Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me express my thoughts and feelings clearly. However, if there is a distance between us, I use social media apps to stay in touch.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Try to give a complete and clear answer without hesitations. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide a specific example. For instance, mention a topic that causes arguments.
Ejemplo: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different thoughts and beliefs. For example, we might disagree about keeping animals as pets, which leads to friendly debates.
× I like that because my friends are I'd the ideal, the ideal friends, uh, I like their thoughts, their beliefs and everything, so I enjoy Chi I'm enjoying to chat with them to know their news, to know uh.
✓ I like that because my friends are the ideal, the ideal friends. I like their thoughts, their beliefs, and everything, so I enjoy chatting with them to know their news.
The phrase 'my friends are I'd the ideal' is incorrect; 'I'd' is likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'the ideal'. Also, 'I enjoy Chi I'm enjoying to chat' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund, so 'enjoy chatting' is correct. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun and verb usage.
× We all go in many topics and umm, many issues in our society.
✓ We all talk about many topics and, umm, many issues in our society.
The phrase 'go in many topics' is incorrect. The correct preposition with 'talk' is 'about'. So, 'talk about many topics' is the proper expression.
× Uh, we are talking actually about our thoughts, our beliefs, our religion or sometimes we are expressing our feelings, our, our umm.
✓ Uh, we actually talk about our thoughts, our beliefs, our religion, or sometimes we express our feelings.
The sentence is awkward with 'we are talking actually' and 'we are expressing'. Using simple present tense 'we talk' and 'we express' is more natural here. Also, the repeated 'our, our umm' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.
× In real life, umm, I prefer to chat with a with a group of people, but umm, through mobile, I prefer to chat with one person because I don't, uh, because chatting with many people distracting me or confusing me, so I prefer to.
✓ In real life, umm, I prefer to chat with a group of people, but umm, through mobile, I prefer to chat with one person because I don't, uh, like chatting with many people; it distracts or confuses me, so I prefer to.
The phrase 'chatting with many people distracting me' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting with many people distracts me'. Also, 'a with a group' is redundant; 'a group' suffices. The sentence is corrected for proper verb agreement and clarity.
× I prefer to communicate face to face because this will help me to express my thoughts and idea and feelings clearly.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because this will help me express my thoughts, ideas, and feelings clearly.
'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. Also, 'help me to express' can be simplified to 'help me express'. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match 'thoughts' and 'feelings'.
× But if there is a distance between us so we cannot do anything, umm I have to chat with them using the social media apps and contact.
✓ But if there is a distance between us, we cannot do anything, umm, so I have to chat with them using social media apps to stay in contact.
The sentence structure is awkward. 'So' should come after the first clause with a comma. 'The social media apps and contact' is unclear; it should be 'using social media apps to stay in contact' for clarity.
× Sometimes, yeah, because we are humans and we have different thoughts and different beliefs. So it's normally or it's nature to argue with each other.
✓ Sometimes, yeah, because we are humans and we have different thoughts and beliefs. So it's normal or it's natural to argue with each other.
'It's normally' is incorrect; the adjective 'normal' should be used instead of the adverb 'normally'. Also, 'it's nature' should be 'it's natural'. These corrections fix adjective/adverb misuse.