Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'with my friends' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share experiences and express my emotions. Moreover, it strengthens our friendship by keeping us connected.

Sugerencia: Try to organise your answer more clearly and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about topics you discuss.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about daily life, work-related matters, and sometimes personal or family issues. Since we all work, conversations about the workplace are quite common.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to explain your preference and avoid repetition. Also, correct minor grammar errors.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it allows for deeper conversations. This way, I find it easier to build a strong connection and communicate effectively.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and word choices. Also, clarify 'racial expressions' to 'facial expressions'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because it allows me to read facial expressions and understand emotions instantly, enabling me to respond appropriately.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain why arguments can happen in friendships. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe arguments are sometimes inevitable in friendships because differing ideas can lead to disagreements. However, these discussions can help build a deeper understanding between friends.

× Not only share the experience with them through chatting in my life to express my emotion, but also chatting with them can enhance our friendship.

✓ Not only do I share experiences with them through chatting in my life to express my emotions, but chatting with them also enhances our friendship.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and auxiliary verb in the 'not only' clause, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'do I' corrects the structure and maintains parallelism. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context, and 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' for natural expression.

× I usually check with my friends about my daily life, my work life or something that personal or maybe like family issues.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily life, my work life, or something personal, maybe family issues.

The verb 'check with' is incorrect in this context; 'chat with' is appropriate for conversations. Also, 'something that personal' is ungrammatical; it should be 'something personal'. The preposition 'about' correctly introduces the topics discussed.

× One thing that is more common, most common in our conversation would be workspace, because you know, we are all people working in.

✓ One thing that is most common in our conversations is the workspace, because, you know, we all work there.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Most common' is the correct superlative form. 'Workspace' needs an article 'the' to specify it. The phrase 'we are all people working in' is incomplete; it should be 'we all work there' for clarity and correctness.

× I personally prefer chat with only one friend than with a group of people.

✓ I personally prefer chatting with only one friend rather than with a group of people.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is required. Also, 'than' should be preceded by 'rather' to form the correct comparative structure 'rather than'.

× I definitely prefer communicate face to face rather than via social media.

✓ I definitely prefer communicating face to face rather than via social media.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'communicating' is needed. Also, 'face to face' is correctly used as an adverbial phrase here.

× I found that communication in person allows you to read their emotions of racial expressions so that you can understand their feelings instantly and give your response correct.

✓ I find that communication in person allows you to read their facial expressions so that you can understand their feelings instantly and give your response correctly.

'Found' should be present tense 'find' to match the general truth. 'Emotions of racial expressions' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'facial expressions'. 'Give your response correct' is ungrammatical; the adverb 'correctly' should be used to modify the verb 'give'.

× Yes, I think it's difficult for you to not argue with friends as long as you want to build a deep relationship and friendship with them, since communication with others often will will stemming from the collide of ideas from.

✓ Yes, I think it's difficult not to argue with friends if you want to build a deep relationship and friendship with them, since communication with others often stems from the clash of ideas.

The phrase 'difficult for you to not argue' is awkward; 'difficult not to argue' is better. 'As long as' is replaced with 'if' for conditional meaning. The phrase 'will will stemming from the collide of ideas from' is ungrammatical and redundant; corrected to 'often stems from the clash of ideas' for clarity and correctness.