Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and splitting your ideas into shorter sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: No, I don't really like chatting with friends because conversations can get too long and sometimes turn into gossip. Moreover, I prefer to keep my personal information private.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers the topic well but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to be more specific with your examples and avoid vague phrases like 'maybe'.

Ejemplo: Since most of my friends are from school, we usually talk about scientific research, homework, and other study-related topics. Additionally, we sometimes discuss our daily lives and even gossip about our teachers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences smoother. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct minor grammar mistakes for a more natural flow.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in large groups, I often feel unseen or unheard. Therefore, focusing on one person helps me avoid uncomfortable situations.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer smoother and more natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see real facial expressions and interact directly, which makes the conversation more enjoyable and genuine.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains some grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct prepositions. Also, avoid comparing maturity in a way that might sound negative.

Ejemplo: No, I usually avoid arguing with friends because I listen carefully to understand them. If a disagreement arises, I try to calm the situation and handle it maturely.

× No, I don't really like chatting with friends as the conversation may get too long and turn into gossip and it can expose secrets and privacy and I would like to keep my personal information with me only.

✓ No, I don't really like chatting with friends as the conversation may get too long and turn into gossip, and it can expose secrets and privacy, and I would like to keep my personal information to myself only.

The phrase 'keep my personal information with me only' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' in the phrase 'keep something to oneself,' which means to keep something private. Using 'with me' is incorrect in this context.

× As I don't really have friends out outside of the school, we usually chat about scientifically research, homework, anything related to studies.

✓ As I don't really have friends outside of the school, we usually chat about scientific research, homework, anything related to studies.

The phrase 'scientifically research' is incorrect because 'scientifically' is an adverb, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'research.' The correct adjective is 'scientific.' Also, 'out outside' is redundant; only 'outside' is needed.

× As I don't really have friends out outside of the school, we usually chat about scientifically research, homework, anything related to studies.

✓ As I don't really have friends outside of the school, we usually chat about scientific research, homework, anything related to studies.

The phrase 'friends out outside of the school' contains an unnecessary preposition 'out.' The correct phrase is 'friends outside of the school.'

× I prefer to chat with only one friend as being with a group of people, especially when it's a huge number, I can feel unseen or unheard.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I am with a group of people, especially when it's a large number, I can feel unseen or unheard.

The phrase 'as being with a group of people' is awkward and incorrect. 'Because when I am with a group of people' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'huge number' is better expressed as 'large number.'

× So I'd rather to focus, focus with one friend only and prevent the uncomfortable situation I can be in.

✓ So I'd rather focus, focus on one friend only and prevent the uncomfortable situation I can be in.

The phrase 'I'd rather to focus' is incorrect because 'rather' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to.' Also, the correct preposition after 'focus' is 'on,' not 'with.'

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their real facial expressions and their interaction with my words and with my conversation and I can feel it's a real a real talking time and fun.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their real facial expressions and their interaction with my words and my conversation, and I can feel it's a real talking time and fun.

The phrase 'interaction with my words and with my conversation' is redundant; 'with' before 'my conversation' is unnecessary. Also, 'a real a real' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'a real.'

× No, I don't really argue with friends because I can hear them and try to avoid the misunderstood between each us.

✓ No, I don't really argue with friends because I can hear them and try to avoid misunderstandings between each of us.

The phrase 'the misunderstood between each us' is incorrect. 'Misunderstood' is an adjective or past participle, but here the noun 'misunderstandings' is needed. Also, 'each us' should be 'each of us.'

× And even if they wanted to argue, I would stop that immediately and try to be more mature than them.

✓ Even if they want to argue, I would stop that immediately and try to be more mature than them.

The phrase 'even if they wanted to argue' mixes past tense 'wanted' with present/future context. Since the sentence expresses a habitual or general condition, present tense 'want' is appropriate after 'even if.' Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be omitted.