Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because I can share my experiences and ask about their lives. It feels enjoyable and helps strengthen our friendship.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to organize your answer clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the topics you discuss.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about various topics, but mainly about our future plans and current situations. For example, we discuss what we want to do after graduation or challenges we are facing now.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, explain your preference with more specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am introverted and value privacy. Talking one-on-one allows me to share personal thoughts comfortably without worrying about others.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to share emotions more effectively. When we meet in person, I can better understand my friends' feelings through their expressions.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Organize your answer logically using linking words and explain your behavior with clear reasons.

Ejemplo: As an introvert, I rarely argue with friends. If a disagreement arises, I prefer to stay silent to avoid making the situation worse, so arguments happen very rarely.

× Yes, I would like to chatting with my friends is I have some of my friends who are really close to me so I talk to them about my situation and I sometime ask them about how they are doing.

✓ Yes, I would like to chat with my friends because I have some friends who are really close to me, so I talk to them about my situation and sometimes ask them how they are doing.

The phrase 'would like to chatting' is incorrect because after 'would like to' the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence was also restructured for clarity and grammar.

× I sometime ask them about how they are doing.

✓ I sometimes ask them about how they are doing.

The word 'sometime' means 'at an unspecified time' but here the intended meaning is frequency, so 'sometimes' is correct.

× So it feels like enjoyable with my friends when I chat with them.

✓ So it feels enjoyable with my friends when I chat with them.

The phrase 'feels like enjoyable' is incorrect. 'Feel' can be followed directly by an adjective, so 'feels enjoyable' is correct. 'Like' is unnecessary here.

× Uh, there will be so many topics, but uh, the major topic would be kind of, uh, the future,

✓ Uh, there are so many topics, but the major topic is kind of the future,

The use of 'there will be' is incorrect here because the speaker is talking about usual topics, so present tense 'there are' is appropriate. Also, 'would be' should be 'is' to match present tense.

× Uh, what about we'll be doing in future and sometime talking about the situation right now, what kind of things that has been going through.

✓ Uh, what we will be doing in the future and sometimes talking about the current situation, what kind of things have been going on.

'We'll be doing' is correct for future, but 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Has been going through' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have been going on' to describe ongoing events.

× I do also have less friends so I I would prefer to talk to only one person or only one friend because it is kind of privacy also.

✓ I also have few friends, so I would prefer to talk to only one person or one friend because it is kind of private as well.

'Less friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is countable; 'few friends' is correct. Also, 'privacy' is a noun, but here the adjective 'private' fits better. 'Kind of privacy' should be 'kind of private'.

× So if I talk to him or her only so it will be remain on both.

✓ So if I talk to him or her only, it will remain between both of us.

The phrase 'it will be remain on both' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'it will remain between both of us' to express confidentiality. Also, a comma is needed before 'so'.

× I feel more comfortable with face to face because is it's been a kind of habit for me that if I get together with them and if I talk to them with face to face, it will like there will be kind of emotion I can share with my friends.

✓ I feel more comfortable with face-to-face communication because it has become a habit for me that when I get together with them and talk face to face, there is a kind of emotion I can share with my friends.

The sentence has several issues: 'because is it's been' is incorrect; it should be 'because it has been'. 'Talk to them with face to face' is incorrect; 'talk face to face' is correct. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammar.

× So I prefer to talk to face to face.

✓ So I prefer to talk face to face.

The phrase 'talk to face to face' is incorrect because 'talk' here does not require the preposition 'to' before 'face to face'.

× Is I already told you that I'm kind of introvert person.

✓ As I already told you, I am kind of an introverted person.

'Is I already told you' is incorrect; it should be 'As I already told you'. Also, 'introvert person' should be 'introverted person' and 'an' is needed before a vowel sound.

× So if this situation happens, uh, which can lead to us argue.

✓ So if this situation happens, which can lead to us arguing,

The phrase 'lead to us argue' is incorrect; 'lead to' should be followed by a noun or gerund, so 'us arguing' is correct.

× So I feel like it's better not to talk or better not to speak anything because if I speak, the things will get worse.

✓ So I feel like it's better not to talk or say anything because if I speak, things will get worse.

'Better not to speak anything' is incorrect; 'say anything' is the correct collocation. Also, 'the things' should be 'things' without 'the'.