Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'matters that, uh, that in your deep emotional intelligence.' Instead, use clear and natural expressions to convey your ideas effectively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives and sometimes discuss deeper emotional topics.

Sugerencia: Reduce the use of filler words and provide more specific examples to enrich your answer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually chat about various topics, ranging from my daily experiences to personal problems. For example, when something bothers me, my friends often give me helpful advice.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to clarify your preferences and provide clear reasons.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I have a personal issue, I prefer to talk to one friend. However, for everyday conversations, I enjoy chatting with a group.

Sugerencia: Eliminate filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe the other person's reactions, which helps me adjust my conversation accordingly.

Sugerencia: Clarify your statements and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words to express contrast and conditions clearly.

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy conflicts, so I rarely argue with my friends. However, if I strongly believe in something, I might argue with them occasionally.

× I love talking about daily things with them and also, uh, matters that, uh, that in your deep emotional intelligence.

✓ I love talking about daily things with them and also, uh, matters that, uh, involve deep emotional intelligence.

The phrase 'that in your deep emotional intelligence' is incorrect because the preposition 'in' is not properly used here. The correct preposition is 'involve' to indicate that the matters relate to deep emotional intelligence. Using 'involve' clarifies the relationship between the matters and emotional intelligence.

× I guess it depends on the situation. Uh, I do prefer if it is something, uh, that is bothering me, something I would like to share with one person.

✓ I guess it depends on the situation. Uh, I do prefer it if it is something, uh, that is bothering me, something I would like to share with one person.

The phrase 'I do prefer if it is something' is missing the object 'it' after 'prefer'. The verb 'prefer' requires an object to indicate what is preferred. Adding 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Uh, if it is a normal di daily, day-to-day conversation, I like to do it in a group.

✓ Uh, if it is a normal daily, day-to-day conversation, I like to do it in a group.

The word 'di' appears to be a typographical error and should be removed. The phrase 'normal daily, day-to-day conversation' is correct and clear without the extra 'di'.

× I personally, I prefer to communicate face to face, but of, uh, because, uh, I can, uh, see the person, I can see how he reacts to what I'm saying.

✓ I personally prefer to communicate face to face because I can see the person and how he reacts to what I'm saying.

The phrase 'but of, uh, because, uh,' is incorrect and redundant. The conjunction 'but of' is not standard English. Removing 'but of' and combining the sentence with 'because' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I really argue with my friends. I'm not a person who that enjoys conflict, but if it is something that I firmly believe in then I might argue with my friends about it sometimes.

✓ I don't really argue with my friends. I'm not a person who enjoys conflict, but if it is something that I firmly believe in, then I might argue with my friends about it sometimes.

The original sentence 'I really argue with my friends' contradicts the following statement about not enjoying conflict. Changing it to 'I don't really argue with my friends' aligns the meaning. Also, 'who that enjoys' is incorrect; only one relative pronoun is needed ('who'). Adding a comma before 'then' improves sentence structure.