Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contradictory. You said chatting makes you more isolated, which is confusing. Try to give a clear and direct answer with supporting reasons, and avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected even when we are not together in person. For example, we often share updates about our day through messages.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but you repeated "interesting things" and could use more varied vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily routines. For instance, I often share details about my morning runs and any exciting events during the day. Additionally, we discuss our plans for the weekend.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have many friends at university who are fun to talk with. Moreover, group chats allow me to hear different opinions and enjoy lively conversations.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you could add a linking word and a specific example to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see the other person's emotions clearly, which helps me understand them better. For example, I can notice their facial expressions and tone of voice during conversations.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains many filler words, which affects clarity. Try to give a complete and coherent answer with specific details and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Sometimes, I argue with my friends over trivial matters, but I always admit my mistakes and try to resolve conflicts quickly to maintain our friendship.

× Yeah, it's because chatting with friends make me more isolated.

✓ Yeah, it's because chatting with friends makes me more isolated.

The subject 'chatting with friends' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× Communicate with my friends because I don't have to meet my friends face to face and talk with my friends.

✓ I communicate with my friends because I don't have to meet them face to face to talk.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is repetitive. Adding 'I' as the subject and reducing repetition improves clarity and sentence structure.

× sometimes we also talk about our plans in the weekends.

✓ sometimes we also talk about our plans on the weekends.

The correct preposition for days or periods like 'weekends' is 'on', not 'in'. Using 'on the weekends' is standard English usage.

× I prefer to chat with group of people because umm, I have a lot of friends in my university and they're so fun and I really like to communicate with them.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because, umm, I have a lot of friends in my university and they're so fun and I really like to communicate with them.

The phrase 'group of people' requires the article 'a' before 'group' because 'group' is singular and countable.

× So when I chat with their the group so umm, I can see the interesting.

✓ So when I chat with the group, umm, I can see interesting things.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('their the'). Correcting the article and sentence structure clarifies the meaning.