Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Well, chatting is one of the obligation of the people in all over the world because from chatting we can, uh, connect with other people even we far away from them. So I always do chatting with my friend, with my parents when I'm away.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Well I did check many kind of chat with my friend but one of the most chat that I remember was talking about my friend a job. So he want to ask me something about this job it is sweet or not. So I give an explain.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
Well, I prefer to take a chat with one friend other than in a group chat, because in a group chat the point of interest that I send to the group is never answered well, so they always make it fun or something rather than in one chat with friend they will take it.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Well, I prefer to uh, communicate face to face other than social media. Why? Because face to face we can see the gesture of the people when we talk and also the point of interest we share umm can related rather than in social media and also.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Well, argue, yeah, sometimes we do argue with friend when we have something different in point of view, such as in something that we do for our job. Especially in in work we always miss comma.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar by saying 'chatting is an important way for people around the world to connect, even when they are far apart. I often chat with my friends and parents when I'm away.'
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected, especially when we're far apart. I often chat with my friends and family to keep in touch.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'I usually chat about various topics, but one memorable conversation was about my friend's job. He asked me if the job was good, so I explained it to him.'
Ejemplo: I usually chat about different things, but one time my friend asked me about his job and whether it was a good opportunity. I explained the pros and cons to help him decide.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference. For example, 'I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because in group chats, my points are often ignored or turned into jokes, whereas one-on-one chats are more focused.'
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because in group chats, my messages often get overlooked or turned into jokes. One-on-one chats allow for more meaningful conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and complete. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see people's gestures and better understand each other's points, which is harder through social media.'
Ejemplo: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, making the conversation more meaningful than chatting on social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Clarify your answer and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain. For example, 'Yes, sometimes I argue with friends when we have different opinions, especially about work-related matters.'
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different views, particularly about work. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better.
× Well, chatting is one of the obligation of the people in all over the world because from chatting we can, uh, connect with other people even we far away from them.
✓ Well, chatting is one of the obligations of the people all over the world because from chatting we can, uh, connect with other people even when we are far away from them.
The word 'obligation' should be plural 'obligations' because it refers to one among many obligations. Also, 'even we far away' is missing 'when' and the verb 'are' to form a correct clause 'even when we are far away'.
× So I always do chatting with my friend, with my parents when I'm away.
✓ So I always chat with my friends and my parents when I'm away.
The phrase 'do chatting' is incorrect; the verb 'chat' should be used directly. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people.
× Well I did check many kind of chat with my friend but one of the most chat that I remember was talking about my friend a job.
✓ Well, I did have many kinds of chats with my friends but one of the chats that I remember most was talking about my friend's job.
The phrase 'did check' is incorrect; 'did have' or 'had' is appropriate. 'Many kind' should be 'many kinds' to be plural. 'Chat' should be plural 'chats'. 'My friend a job' should be 'my friend's job' to show possession.
× So he want to ask me something about this job it is sweet or not.
✓ So he wants to ask me something about this job, whether it is good or not.
The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'it is sweet or not' is awkward; 'whether it is good or not' is clearer.
× So I give an explain.
✓ So I gave an explanation.
The phrase 'give an explain' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'explanation' and the past tense verb 'gave' matches the past context.
× Well, I prefer to take a chat with one friend other than in a group chat, because in a group chat the point of interest that I send to the group is never answered well, so they always make it fun or something rather than in one chat with friend they will take it.
✓ Well, I prefer to have a chat with one friend rather than in a group chat, because in a group chat the points of interest that I send to the group are never answered well, so they always make it fun or something, whereas in a one-on-one chat with a friend they will take it seriously.
'Take a chat' should be 'have a chat'. 'Point of interest' should be plural 'points of interest' to match 'they'. 'Friend' should be 'a friend'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× Well, I prefer to uh, communicate face to face other than social media.
✓ Well, I prefer to, uh, communicate face to face rather than via social media.
The phrase 'other than social media' is better expressed as 'rather than via social media' to correctly indicate the medium of communication.
× Because face to face we can see the gesture of the people when we talk and also the point of interest we share umm can related rather than in social media and also.
✓ Because face to face, we can see people's gestures when we talk, and also the points of interest we share can be related better than on social media.
The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Gesture of the people' should be 'people's gestures'. 'Can related' should be 'can be related'. 'Rather than in social media' should be 'better than on social media'.
× Well, argue, yeah, sometimes we do argue with friend when we have something different in point of view, such as in something that we do for our job.
✓ Well, argue, yeah, sometimes we do argue with friends when we have different points of view, such as about something we do for our job.
'Argue with friend' should be 'argue with friends' to indicate plural. 'Something different in point of view' should be 'different points of view' to be plural and idiomatic.
× Especially in in work we always miss comma.
✓ Especially at work, we always miss commas.
'In in work' is a repetition and incorrect preposition; 'at work' is correct. 'Miss comma' should be plural 'miss commas' to indicate more than one comma.