Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding unclear phrases. For example, say "I'm an introverted person, so I prefer to keep my social circle small and private." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I like chatting with friends, but since I'm an introverted person, I prefer to keep my social circle small. I usually keep my personal matters private and don't like to discuss everything with others.

Sugerencia: Improve coherence by using linking words and correct grammar. Also, be more specific and natural. For example, say "I usually chat about nutrition, music, and TV series. When I finish watching a series, I ask my friends for recommendations to find new shows or movies, especially if there are new trends."

Ejemplo: I usually chat about nutrition, music, and TV series. When I finish watching a show, I ask my friends for recommendations so I can discover new movies or series, especially if there are any new trends.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. For example, "I find it easier to chat with one person at a time because group conversations can be chaotic with many people sharing ideas. Therefore, I prefer one-on-one chats."

Ejemplo: I find it easier to chat with one person at a time because group conversations can be quite chaotic with everyone sharing their ideas. Therefore, I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a big group.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, "It actually depends on my mood and the situation. If the person is nearby, I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can understand them better and see their expressions. However, if they live overseas, I use social media."

Ejemplo: It actually depends on my mood and the situation. If the person is nearby, I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can understand them better and see their expressions. However, if they live overseas, I use social media to keep in touch.

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by correcting grammar and using linking words. For example, "I don't usually argue with friends because I care about them and don't want to hurt anyone. I try to stay calm and control my temper, although it can be difficult sometimes."

Ejemplo: I don't usually argue with friends because I care about them and don't want to hurt anyone. I try to stay calm and control my temper, although it can be difficult sometimes.

× Because I'm a introverted person.

✓ Because I'm an introverted person.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'introverted' to ensure correct pronunciation and grammar.

× My social cycle is quite limited so I have hand conference.

✓ My social circle is quite limited so I have social anxiety.

The phrase 'hand conference' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended phrase is 'social anxiety' or similar. Also, 'social cycle' should be 'social circle' to correctly refer to one's group of friends.

× I don't wanna talk anything about other about with.

✓ I don't want to talk about anything with others.

The sentence has incorrect word order and preposition use. 'Talk about anything with others' is the correct structure. Also, 'wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred in formal speech.

× I normally chat about nutrients, songs and sometimes TV series.

✓ I normally chat about news, songs and sometimes TV series.

'Nutrients' is likely a mistake for 'news' or another topic. 'Nutrients' refers to substances in food, which is unusual as a chat topic. Correcting to 'news' fits better contextually.

× When I'm done with my Current TV series, I would ask some suggestions from my friend.

✓ When I'm done with my current TV series, I would ask for some suggestions from my friends.

'Suggestions' should be preceded by 'ask for'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of asking suggestions.

× Then I can find some good movies and TV series as well as if there are if there is a new trend.

✓ Then I can find some good movies and TV series, as well as if there is a new trend.

The sentence has redundant 'if there are if there is'. The correct form is 'if there is a new trend' since 'trend' is singular.

× I find it easy for me to chat with a one person at a time.

✓ I find it easy to chat with one person at a time.

The phrase 'a one person' is incorrect; 'one person' alone is sufficient. Also, 'for me' is unnecessary here.

× If there is a group it will be quite difficult to communicate as everyone is presenting their ideas and so it is like a mess.

✓ If there is a group, it will be quite difficult to communicate as everyone is presenting their ideas, so it is like a mess.

Missing commas affect sentence clarity. Adding commas after 'group' and before 'so' improves readability.

× It is actually depend on my mood and the situation.

✓ It actually depends on my mood and the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'It'.

× If the person is in front of me and it's easy for her to come to my place, I would have a face to face conversation which is really good and I can understand her very well and I can see the expressions.

✓ If the person is in front of me and it's easy for her to come to my place, I will have a face-to-face conversation which is really good because I can understand her very well and see her expressions.

'Would have' suggests conditional mood; 'will have' fits better here. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. Adding 'because' improves sentence flow.

× I always care about the people who are surrounding me.

✓ I always care about the people who surround me.

The verb 'surround' is better used in simple present tense here rather than present participle 'are surrounding' to express a general fact.

× I don't wanna hurt anyone.

✓ I don't want to hurt anyone.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' for proper grammar and formality.