Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and make it more natural by using simpler expressions. For example, instead of 'unwind my feelings' you can say 'relax' or 'feel comfortable'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like 'gossip about a lot of things that we have been holding onto ourselves'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share things that I might not tell others.

Sugerencia: Try to improve grammar and clarity. Use correct pronouns and plural forms, and avoid vague phrases like 'different secret things'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about how we have been doing, what is happening around us, and sometimes share personal secrets.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure. Use correct plural forms and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one close friend because it feels more comfortable and allows me to share my personal experiences openly.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use clearer and more concise sentences. Also, improve grammar and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand how the other person feels and how comfortable they are with me, unlike social media.

Sugerencia: Avoid excessive filler words and improve sentence clarity. Explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often argue with my friends, but it's a way we show our care and affection for each other.

× We usually chat about ourself like how we have been doing and what the things are happening around us and gossiping our different secret things.

✓ We usually chat about ourselves, like how we have been doing and what things are happening around us, and gossip about our different secret things.

The pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect here; the correct reflexive pronoun for 'we' is 'ourselves'. Also, 'gossiping our different secret things' should be 'gossip about our different secret things' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× When it comes to me, I prefer only one friend than a group of friend because umm, chatting with the that one close friend of mine is kind of comfortable and helps me to unwind my different feelings and share my personal experience.

✓ When it comes to me, I prefer only one friend rather than a group of friends because, umm, chatting with that one close friend of mine is kind of comfortable and helps me to unwind my different feelings and share my personal experiences.

The phrase 'a group of friend' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of friends' to match plural form. Also, 'than' should be 'rather than' for correct comparison. 'Personal experience' is better as plural 'personal experiences' to match the context.

× I prefer to chat or face to face rather than the social media because, uh, in this, uh, in the social media, we don't know how they are feeling about us and how comfortable they are with us.

✓ I prefer to chat face to face rather than on social media because, uh, on social media, we don't know how they are feeling about us and how comfortable they are with us.

The phrase 'chat or face to face' is awkward; it should be 'chat face to face'. Also, the preposition 'in the social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on social media'. The definite article 'the' before 'social media' is unnecessary here.

× And while on the face to face, we can easily know how much comfortable and uh, umm, they are friendly with us.

✓ And while face to face, we can easily know how comfortable and friendly they are with us.

The phrase 'on the face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'while face to face' without 'on' or 'the'. Also, 'how much comfortable' should be 'how comfortable' and 'they are friendly with us' is better as 'friendly they are with us' for correct adjective placement.