Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit redundant. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'your current situation' and 'put a mask on your face' without explanation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected and relax. For example, we often share updates about our lives and support each other during stressful times.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too vague and contains many fillers. Try to be more specific about the topics you discuss and organize your answer with clear linking words. Avoid repeating words and use a wider range of vocabulary.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our future plans, hobbies, and daily experiences. For instance, we often discuss our goals and share ideas about what we want to achieve.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, clarify your preferences with examples.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one when discussing sensitive topics because it's more private. However, I enjoy group chats for casual conversations and sharing different opinions.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and repetition. Try to avoid fillers and repeat words. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand emotions better. In contrast, social media lacks these cues, making communication less effective.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your point and give specific examples of how you handle disagreements.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about controversial topics like politics or personal opinions. However, we always listen to each other's views and respect our differences.

× It's like a way to communicate with your current situation, the relationship.

✓ It's like a way to communicate your current situation and relationship.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'with your current situation, the relationship' which is awkward and unclear. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here. The correction removes 'with' and connects the ideas more clearly, improving sentence clarity and grammar.

× Have they gotten in a relationship or it's like a recreation, a time that you can relax, you don't have to put a mask on your face.

✓ Have they gotten into a relationship, or is it like a recreation, a time when you can relax and don't have to put a mask on your face?

The original sentence has incorrect preposition 'in' after 'gotten' and awkward conjunction use. 'Gotten in a relationship' should be 'gotten into a relationship'. Also, 'it's like a recreation' should be connected properly with 'or is it like a recreation'. The correction fixes preposition and sentence structure for clarity.

× If we are talking something stressful, we have to discuss something by topic or we are discussing something someone or something I don't like.

✓ If we are talking about something stressful, we have to discuss it by topic, or we are discussing someone or something I don't like.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to a topic. Also, the phrase 'discuss something by topic' is unclear; 'discuss it by topic' clarifies the meaning. The correction adds necessary prepositions and clarifies the sentence.

× So I wouldn't like to talk uh to judge someone in a group, but I would like to hear others opinion in one.

✓ So I wouldn't like to talk or judge someone in a group, but I would like to hear others' opinions individually.

The original sentence misuses 'to talk uh to judge' which is unclear and awkward. Also, 'others opinion in one' is incorrect; it should be 'others' opinions individually' to express hearing opinions one by one. The correction improves clarity and corrects possessive form.

× Face to face win because why social media, you often didn't, uh, recognize the hidden, hidden, uh, emotion of the others.

✓ Face to face wins because on social media, you often don't recognize the hidden emotions of others.

The phrase 'Face to face win' lacks subject-verb agreement; it should be 'wins'. Also, 'because why social media' is incorrect; 'because on social media' is appropriate. 'Didn't' should be 'don't' to match present tense. 'Emotion of the others' should be 'emotions of others' for correct plural and article use.

× Yes, I do argue with friend with some controversial topic like the, some politics on which side he's, he is a side, the side of or some, uh, some opinions on his personal life.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends about some controversial topics like politics, which side he is on, or some opinions on his personal life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'friend' instead of plural 'friends'. Also, 'some controversial topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the examples. The phrase 'on which side he's, he is a side, the side of' is awkward and corrected to 'which side he is on' for clarity and correctness.