Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が冗長で繰り返しが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like chatting with my friends because it takes a lot of time, and I prefer to spend my time doing more productive activities.

Sugerencia: 内容は具体的ですが、文が長く繰り返しが見られます。接続詞を使って文を整理し、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about music, especially K-pop, which I really like. We also often talk about studying since we study together frequently.

Sugerencia: 回答が否定的で、理由は述べられていますが、言い回しが不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より自然な表現で理由を明確に伝えましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel nervous talking to people I don't know well.

Sugerencia: 「facial explanation」は不自然な表現です。より適切な語彙を使い、理由を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because seeing facial expressions helps me understand what people mean more clearly.

Sugerencia: 「meaningless of arguing」という表現は不自然です。より自然な言い回しで理由を説明し、繰り返しを避けましょう。

Ejemplo: I used to argue with my friends when I was a child, but now I avoid arguments because I think they are pointless.

× No, I don't like chatting with my friends because it it takes a lot of time to to talk with my friends so I won't.

✓ No, I don't like chatting with my friends because it takes a lot of time to talk with my friends, so I won't.

The sentence contains repeated words 'it it' and 'to to' which are typographical errors and should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× I don't like UMM doing other activities to use more time more effective.

✓ I don't like doing other activities because I want to use my time more effectively.

The phrase 'more effective' is an adjective but should be an adverb 'more effectively' to modify the verb 'use'. Also, 'UMM' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech.

× I like communicating with people face to face because watching their facial explanation is so useful to know what they said and what they want.

✓ I like communicating with people face to face because watching their facial expressions is very useful to understand what they say and what they want.

The phrase 'facial explanation' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'to know' should be 'to understand' for better clarity and correctness.

× I'm nervous when I speak people who are not, uh, friends, so I don't like it.

✓ I'm nervous when I speak to people who are not, uh, friends, so I don't like it.

The verb 'speak' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to people. Omitting 'to' is a common error.

× Uh, I used to argue with my friends when I was a child. But listen, these days I I don't argue with my friends because it is so meaningless of arguing with friends.

✓ Uh, I used to argue with my friends when I was a child. But these days, I don't argue with my friends because arguing with friends is so meaningless.

The phrase 'meaningless of arguing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'arguing with friends is so meaningless'. Also, 'But listen' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.