Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác như "hanging" mà nên dùng "hanging out". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we hang out at a coffee shop and share about our daily routines.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh như "something about our teenagers" và "This is not only help me to relax and why". Hãy sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about food, fashion, and our experiences as teenagers. These conversations help me relax and share our adventures together.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi lặp từ như "she is one of my she is one of my". Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer to discuss academic topics with a group of friends, but I share my personal thoughts only with my best friend because she understands me well.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và câu dài không rõ nghĩa như "towards to what are they say what they are saying". Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my feelings and understand others' emotions better. However, online chatting is more convenient for keeping in touch.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "do this bigger" và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Sometimes we have small arguments, but we avoid making them bigger because it can harm our relationship. We prefer to resolve issues face to face to improve understanding.

× Yes, I really love chatting with my friends especially when we are hanging.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with my friends especially when we are hanging out.

The verb 'hang' requires the preposition 'out' to form the phrasal verb 'hang out', which means spending time relaxing or socializing. Without 'out', the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× When we are hanging out or like going to the coffee and like sharing about our daily routine, this is.

✓ When we are hanging out or going to the coffee shop and sharing about our daily routine, this is enjoyable.

The phrase 'going to the coffee' is incomplete; it should be 'going to the coffee shop' or 'going to a coffee place'. Also, 'sharing about' is incorrect; it should be 'sharing' or 'talking about'. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification.

× The topic I usually chat with my friends is about uh, food, fashion and something about our teenagers.

✓ The topics I usually chat about with my friends are food, fashion, and things about teenagers.

The subject 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because multiple subjects are mentioned. Also, 'something about our teenagers' is vague; 'things about teenagers' is clearer and plural to match the context.

× This is one of my favorite thing when I go and hanging out with my friends.

✓ This is one of my favorite things when I go hanging out with my friends.

The phrase 'favorite thing' should be plural 'favorite things' because 'one of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'go and hanging out' is incorrect; it should be 'go hanging out' or 'go and hang out'.

× This is not only help me to relax and why but also to share about our adventures.

✓ This not only helps me to relax and unwind but also allows me to share our adventures.

The phrase 'This is not only help' is incorrect; it should be 'This not only helps' to agree with the singular subject. 'Why' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'unwind'. Also, 'share about' should be 'share'.

× When it comes to academic, academic perform, performance or something about study, I would like to share with a group of my friends.

✓ When it comes to academics, academic performance, or something about studying, I would like to share with a group of my friends.

The word 'academic' should be plural 'academics' when referring to the field of study. 'Academic perform' is incorrect; it should be 'academic performance'. 'Something about study' should be 'something about studying'.

× But when it comes to my thought and my inside thinking, I want to share with my best friend only because she is one of my she is one of my.

✓ But when it comes to my thoughts and inner feelings, I want to share only with my best friend because she is one of my closest friends.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. 'Inside thinking' is awkward; 'inner feelings' or 'inner thoughts' is better. The sentence was incomplete and repetitive; it needs to be completed for clarity.

× I'm a big fan of face to face communication because I can express my feeling or emotion towards to what are they say what they are saying and I can feel their gratitude when chatting with me.

✓ I'm a big fan of face-to-face communication because I can express my feelings or emotions about what they are saying, and I can feel their gratitude when chatting with me.

'Towards to' is incorrect; it should be 'about' or 'towards'. 'Feeling or emotion' should be plural 'feelings or emotions'. The phrase 'what are they say' is incorrect; it should be 'what they are saying'.

× But online help me to like talk with my friends more convenient.

✓ But online communication helps me talk with my friends more conveniently.

'Help me to like talk' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me talk'. 'More convenient' is an adjective; the adverb 'more conveniently' is needed to modify the verb 'talk'.

× Sometimes we do have arguments but just about like some small discussion.

✓ Sometimes we do have arguments, but just about small discussions.

'Like some small discussion' is awkward; 'small discussions' is better. The phrase 'just about like' is incorrect; 'just about' suffices.

× We are not going to do this bigger because it makes our relationship worse, but we need to solve it face to face to make it better.

✓ We are not going to make this bigger because it would harm our relationship, but we need to solve it face to face to make it better.

'Do this bigger' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make this bigger'. Also, 'because it makes our relationship worse' is better expressed as 'because it would harm our relationship' for clarity and correctness.