Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy in your answers. Make your sentences clearer and more concise. Also, ensure correct grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because we often share interesting stories about our daily lives. It helps us stay connected and is a great way to relax and have fun after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about daily incidents and funny stories. For example, we often share interesting things that happened during the day, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me feel more connected and relaxed. One-on-one conversations are usually more enjoyable and personal.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and filler words. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more fluent and coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it makes me feel more confident. It is the best way to stay connected and express opinions directly, which makes communication easier.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictions. Use linking words to explain your feelings and behaviour clearly and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: I usually avoid arguing with friends because it makes me feel irritable. However, sometimes disagreements are unavoidable, but I try to resolve them calmly.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my close friends where we often talk about our daily lives and sharing, share interesting stories which help us to stay connected.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my close friends where we often talk about our daily lives and share interesting stories which help us to stay connected.

The verb 'sharing' is incorrectly used after 'and' where the base form 'share' should be used to maintain parallel structure with the previous verb 'talk'. Using 'sharing' here is incorrect because it breaks the parallelism of the verb phrases.

× And it is it is. It is the best way to connect and relax, have fun even after a busy day.

✓ It is the best way to connect, relax, and have fun even after a busy day.

The original sentence contains repetition ('it is it is') and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. The corrected sentence removes repetition and uses commas and 'and' to list activities properly, improving clarity and flow.

× Usually I chat about with friends, uh, about the daily, daily incidents or the stories and the fun chatting.

✓ Usually I chat with friends about daily incidents or stories and fun chatting.

The phrase 'chat about with friends' is incorrect because 'chat' is followed directly by 'with friends' without 'about'. The preposition 'about' should come after 'chat with friends' to indicate the topic. Also, 'the daily, daily incidents' is redundant; 'daily incidents' suffices.

× For example, uh, even even, uh, some incident happened during the daytime that we are chatting and that is the fun way to.

✓ For example, sometimes an incident happens during the daytime while we are chatting, and that is a fun way to connect.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a complete thought and proper verb tense. The correction clarifies the meaning, uses present tense for habitual actions, and completes the sentence logically.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because that makes me stay connected and feel enjoyable and it makes me so relaxing on that day.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because that makes me stay connected and feel happy, and it makes me feel relaxed on that day.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to chat'). Also, 'feel enjoyable' is incorrect; 'feel happy' or 'enjoyable' as an adjective is better. 'Makes me so relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel relaxed' because 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation, not the feeling itself.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. That makes me more confident. That is the best way that I think to stay connect with people.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. That makes me more confident. I think that is the best way to stay connected with people.

The phrase 'to stay connect' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to stay connected'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by repositioning 'I think' for clarity.

× Uh, and it, it is the best way to, uh, give all opinion directly so that, uh, it will be more easier way.

✓ And it is the best way to give all opinions directly so that it will be an easier way.

'Give all opinion' should be 'give all opinions' (plural). 'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already implies comparison; 'more' is redundant. Also, 'an easier way' requires the article 'an' before the noun phrase.

× I really don't agree with friends because it makes me more, uh, irritable on that day. So, uh, sometime I need to argue.

✓ I really don't argue with friends because it makes me more irritable on that day. However, sometimes I need to argue.

'Don't agree with friends' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'don't argue with friends'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The modal verb 'need to' is acceptable here but the sentence is improved for clarity.

× That is the most difficult time, uh, so mostly I try to avoid, uh, argument arguments.

✓ That is the most difficult time, so mostly I try to avoid arguments.

The phrase 'argument arguments' is redundant; only 'arguments' is needed. Also, 'mostly' is better placed before 'try' for natural flow. The sentence is simplified for clarity.