Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and happy. We often share stories about school and joke around, which is really fun.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'if' và 'when'. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends when I have free time or need advice. For example, if I face a problem, I ask for their opinions, which helps me a lot.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít (friend/friends) và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sở thích của bạn.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal things. It feels safer to keep secrets between just two people.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như thì động từ (makes), và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it makes me feel more comfortable and friendly. For example, I can see my friends' emotions, which helps us connect better.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lắp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions. Since we are best friends, we try to solve problems calmly without getting angry.

× I really like chatting with my friends because they when I chat with them it's very funny and I feel comfortable.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends because when I chat with them, it's very funny and I feel comfortable.

The sentence has a misplaced word 'they' which disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'they' and adding a comma after 'them' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× or sometime they joking is really funny and I really like that so I really.

✓ or sometimes their joking is really funny and I really like that.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used; it should be 'their' to indicate possession. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× If I have something I need advice I will chat with them and they will give me a advice good for me.

✓ If I have something I need advice on, I will chat with them and they will give me good advice.

The article 'a' before 'advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'advice good for me' is awkward; 'good advice' is the correct phrase. Added 'on' after 'advice' for correct preposition usage.

× So I always chat with them when I have a free time.

✓ So I always chat with them when I have free time.

The article 'a' before 'free time' is unnecessary because 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because when I chat with only one friend I can feel comfortable and I can share everything for her.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with only one friend I can feel comfortable and I can share everything with her.

The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to agree with 'only one'. Also, 'share everything for her' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'.

× Maybe that is a secret and I can feel it's safe if I share with her and everyone don't know.

✓ Maybe that is a secret and I feel it's safe if I share with her and no one else knows.

The phrase 'everyone don't know' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'no one else knows' to correctly express that others are unaware. Also, 'I can feel' is better as 'I feel' for natural expression.

× I refer to communicate face to face because it make me feel comfortable and friendly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me feel comfortable and friendly.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× When I communicate face to face you can see emotions of your friends and we can connect more and more.

✓ When I communicate face to face, you can see the emotions of your friends and we can connect more and more.

Added a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Also, added 'the' before 'emotions' as it refers to specific emotions.

× I don't agree with my friends because we are best friends and our view will save them in many situations and the one of reason is we are friends so we don't need to uh angry with them or.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because we are best friends and our views support each other in many situations. One reason is that we are friends, so we don't need to be angry with each other.

The original sentence misuses 'agree' instead of 'argue'. 'Our view will save them' is unclear; corrected to 'our views support each other'. 'The one of reason' should be 'one reason'. 'Angry with them or' is incomplete and corrected to 'be angry with each other' for clarity and correctness.